| Reviews for Restless |
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Guest chapter 3 . 6/3/2018 Ray |
navalhut chapter 7 . 6/23/2016 Awwwww I'm so glad I came across this story, how adorable! I wish there was a chapter of the actual zoo day outing! Would have been so cute. I love it when the whole team gets together as a family. Miss those days |
Maesii chapter 7 . 12/6/2015 I love this plz update! |
Guest chapter 7 . 11/17/2015 more plz |
SmellyThePirate chapter 7 . 12/5/2011 Great story! I'm looking forward to more! The girls are so cute, btw. :3 I had to look up, though, what Ima meant, although I had a clue that it meant mother in Hebrew. I could be wrong, but I did find out that it was written as "Ema" instead of "Ima", but that it's pronounced as "ee-ma." Oh, well. It really doesn't bother me, since I speak squat of Hebrew. :D Anyway, I hope you continue this story, it would be great if you did so. I do have an idea for your story - that is, if you're still around. (Hopefully, you are.) And if you are and you'd like to hear a potential idea for your story, just send me a review reply. Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
ZivaDavid-LesNinja-FemmeLove chapter 1 . 11/11/2011 Good start but um, kind of short. I will read more just because I gotta know why she hasnt been sleeping well. ) |
longlostcloud chapter 7 . 10/8/2010 Keep it going! its great so far! |
MilitaryBrat10 chapter 7 . 10/7/2010 LOVED IT! plz continue! |
earanemith chapter 7 . 8/8/2010 oww i hope you continue i love the story |
bethchilds34 chapter 7 . 5/9/2010 Aaaaawwwww this fic was totally cute and i luves it! Great job on this! I cant wait to see where this goes! Update asap! |
Betherzz chapter 7 . 5/8/2010 its a really great story so far :) cant wait to see how it all plays out :) grandpa gibbs? lol that was a shock! i would love to see tony spend some time with the girls without ziva :) maybe send jen and ziva to the spa for the afternoon or something girlie to give ziva a break :) and him spend the day with the girls, and see where it goes from there... lol also loved tony gave the baby a nickname addy :) ya know dating a single mom is kinda rough sometimes, so tony make plans for doing things with "his girls" lol i can see that one comming at some point :) anyway its a great story so far cant wait to see whatcha do with it |
SpecialAgentZiva chapter 7 . 5/8/2010 The story is, over all, pretty good so far. My only real complaint is you're overusing "the girls." Try to find something different to say instead. Even "my girls" works sometimes, or "the munchkins" or "my kids" or something. |
boheman buddy chapter 7 . 5/8/2010 omgggg i haven't spoke to you in so long! haha mannn i can't believe how long i haven't written in either. well it is still as good as ever my dear xx |
Nymphadora Andromeda Lupin chapter 6 . 4/18/2010 aw cute! YAY! Update soon? |
rockhorsegeek chapter 4 . 5/9/2009 Great story idea! I like the names for the kids and will there be some Tiva? |