Hey, are you still working on this? I hope so! It's so intersting!

This story isn't complete right? I'd love to see you continue it until the end of Kingdom Hearts 2 where they all come back.. I bet you'd write that part good. How their parents all reacted to their return and the time they left too. Is this story gonna go through what happened at Destiny Islands all through Kingdom hearts 1 - 2? Thaat would be pretty great!

I love it so far. Really hoping this isn't the end.

Aw. The chapter where Riku's dad dies almost had me in tears! Sorry for not saying that much, I'm braindead from the sheer awesome of your writing, but still didn't want to favourite and run. Much love!

Hm...I don't know if I like the heartless appearing quite yet. According to the game, the Heartless made their move when Radient Garden fell.

Stumbled upon this story. Usually I do not like the parents in the stories, because they are just rather messy. I like your parents, especially this one of Kairi's mother and father. Not an old idea, though the whole maid mother is an interesting one. I'll read the rest of these!

awesome!

So sad and so possibly true. One can't help but feel bad for our beloved Riku. Sora is so optimistic and naive, but you love and admire his kindness. Strange how if this happened, how Riku took the darkness in so easily

Great chapter. I love how you put it to where Kairi went to Destiny Islands. I love fanfic about Xehanort before he became heartsless. Ansem is cool and he is very regretful, but you gotta love him

That's so sad what happened to Masse. It's cool how you had Zell, Locke and Zidane, thet're cool. Poor Riku and Ulaya, no wonder Riku turned to darkness later.

I knew it!...that the doctor was Braig I mean

Whoa! You just blew me away. Each one of these is so interesting and unique. I love the added background you've set up with these. Keep writing!

I had a feeling that Ansem would be Kairi's dad. The Sora necklace thing was pretty cool. I wonder if it belonged to a proir keyblade master. Kairi's mom being a maid is original, but Ansem wanting to hide Kairi away is something good for later chapters. Good job.

wow, I just read all 4 chapters. xD And I have to say this is a really great story. It's different than all the other ones I've seen. D Although...Kairi's name means land

Your story makes me smile :)

clever. I like the names.