Gaaahh! This is too sweeeet and fluffy and all other sugary goodness! D. More please!

Awwuu!

This was cute. :3

I like how Franzilla tried to murder the cake but Edgeyroth saved the day!

So... does that mean there's more? It hasn't been updated in a while and I REALLY want to read more. It was funny and cute and Miles/Franziska is my favorite pairing!

I really hope there is another chapter at some point. And if not, I guess I can live with this but technically it can stand as a oneshot, but more would be awesome!

-PHoenix Tilea out...

That was sweet and sexy, are there going to be more chapters? It says "end of chapter 1"...

I want more chapters!

It's so sweet ! I found of Franziska and Miles ! Please write an other fic about them. You can be sure I'll sent you rewiews !

Congratulations again !

PS: sorry for my English, I'm French

This.. is so... pretty!

Must... have... more!

This made me giggle like a total, obsessive, foolish moron. AWESOME. I saw PLENTY of typos, etc., but it was just TOO good for me to care. I am in love with this pairing, and that kind of romance. XD

Miles was hilarious... And Franziska seemed like she was PMSing, as usual. Pretty in character for the most part, although they slipped a little bit, once or twice.

8D For the record, now I'm probably going to start giggling every time I see or eat chocolate cake. I like the kind of story that leaves that kind of imprint in my mind.

Nine out of ten. (One point deducted for the typos and slightly OOC parts.) Nice!

0_0! So many reviews! Thank you! I appreciate them all, good and bad, it helps me write better stories for you all. I feel so happy! (Thanks kyo'slittlekittenkisa for putting this up for me!)

I've been seized by inspiration to start work on the next chappie! As soon as I finish a little homework.

Bad Emmy! Putting this off for so long... .

Very cute. I do agree woth anon, though. Well, only partially. Edgeworth was OOC at the end of the chapter, but in the beginning, he was nicely IC. he started going OOC when he was telling Franziska to taste the icing. that's all.

otherwise, very cute.

~Lfish

Please, do continue. Well, more like do tell your friend to continue.

This fanfiction world needs more heterosexual fictions with charming/sexy male characters for a change.

Miles/Franziska are now officially my favorite PW pairing. And how 'kinky' was your story, eh? Well... for a T rated fiction that is. Just right on the spot, not too much to spoil the fun, but enough.

Anyway, fictions easy to read are good. Fictions with pairings I enjoy are good. Fictions with characters in character are good. Therefore... your fiction is good.

Keep up the good job please.

My favorite pairing EVER! Update soon, I love it so far!

aww, I love fluff!

No more. please. Just stop. If this is houw you write, then I'm sure as heck goin to avoid your writings from now on.

See, this is why I don't like Edgeworth in het situations. It's hard for poeple to keep him in character. You obviously can't.

v_v

It's a little hard to imagine Franziska actually making a cake, (I think she'd rather whip a chef into doing it) but this was really quite cute, and fairly believeable. It's always nice to see someone attempt the Miles/Franziska pairing.

He he, that was a cute little story and a joy to read :)