Love the comment about being asked to babysit McKay the greatest sign of trust Sheppard could bestow. I couldn't help laughing at John's comment about not taking your whole army on a stealth mission. Sheppard won't sleep not with Lorne MIA, Elizabeth should know that better than anyone. Trust him to go in alone - rather smart/stupid to leave a radio jamming device in the gate room. Love Doctor Nathan's behaviour in the gate room - learnt from experience I take it. Why's Captain Kendry the ranking officer where's Major Teldy. I think the comment 'I didn't exactly come with Weir's blessing' is the understatement of the century.

Really enjoyed this ) I love Shep and Lorne together- particularly in rescue, disregard for rules mode

More please D

Great job.

woot! go sheppard. i think he was right in this situation. he shouldn't have disobeyed orders, sure, but elizabeth shouldn't have given them. she really outta learn to pick her battles with him.

Hey, wouldja look at that! I was killed! (my name's Teagan, close enough!)

Thanks for writing, love this, will add you for futire updates!

Hurry up and write more!

Sounds like this could be part of an awesome series. Hoping you're going to continue with it! :)

That was great, nice to see you posting. Forgot to mention this in my post at Stargate Command! I can't wait to see the next installments. Oh, almost forgot, I'm Aillana from Stargate Command, in case you were wondering!

Good beginning, especially since it's got hurt!Lorne. Can't wait for the rest!

An interesting beginning. Looking forward to more.

ok cool story since its a series i really hope the next installment will tell us some of what happened after the return on this one hehe :)

Good stuff

Great start! Loved it. More please!

An ejoyable change of pace read. Looking foward to the next one.

He's in hot water, but understandable.

Glad he got Lorne.

Great start...the new Athosian (if he's athosian) is a nice potential mystery.

great chapter