You know, I wasn't gouged in the eyes with a plastic spork.
I think it was /you/ who kinda just *stabs heart with invisible spork*.
Except it was a plastic one, no.
It was one made entirely from these things called feelings.
And you sorta just stabbed my non-existant heart with it.
Well done, Bravo.

It was honestly a good read, something worth spending a couple of mintues on, and I liked it I think it captured the two well, but however, every book has it's faults and there are some grammtical errors that I think need attained to, but as for that, it was all in all a good read.

if anyone gouged out their eyes, then they would never get to properly appreciate this wonderful piece of ART!

I love this fic.

Aw...bittersweet ending. Nice work.

...You read Ansem Retorts, don't you? Bendy straws and hot pockets.

Anyway.

I liked this a lot. Funny, sweet and sad. A good up the good work!

Aw, it's so sad. Why would we gouge our eyes out with sporks? It's good, srsly.

O_O It was so cute and wonderful...until the end. I was so sad. *sobs*

Poor Axel. Roxas...he forgot. *cries again*

You mean girl. That made me sad :(

;_; that was so. damn. sad. And adorable. I think I may have cavities now! The part when you fight Axel in the game was so very depressing ha ha, poor bastard. I really like the writing in this, it's very nice Great fic!

ah i almost wanna gouge my eyes out with a spork

(LOL AT THAT STATEMENT)

but only at how good this is..

amazing writing.. it slightly confuses me.. but you know..

i get confused at everything

i loved your writing and the ninja skills at the begining LOL

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... Im about to cry... poor axel he was just left there to wallow in his self pity... or destroy Roxas as he was so kindly ordered to do...

and the flower... that makes me think totally diffrently about the game, even if it didnt (acording to the authors) didnt happen.

your story was funny at the begining and by the end i was crying.

it was a really good story_

NYA!

HE FORGOT!

That is unforgivable

I cried

OMG! I like, totally squealed at the end!

I was like "Aw, that's so sad!"

Totally made me want to cry (

And they were so happy in the beginning!

It was so kyute :D I simply loved it!

But...it was so sad too! ;w;

On another note...

Is "Lemmiki" the name of the flower?

Or something else? lol )

Again, it was totally awesome!

Even for a sad story

Cute!