Brilliantly crafted plot and wonderful characters. Love the reaction for Feanor's sons' names. I reread your stories from time to time and I am captivated by them as I had been during my first reading. Your stories are magnificent and you made me care about your characters. Thank you so much for sharing.

I love the portrayal of first Elves. Looking forward to update. Thank you for writing and sharing your wonderful story.

The beginnings of Elves are full of life in your story. Can't wait for another chapter!

I LOVE your story. Hope you will update soon. Thank you for sharing!

What an amazing story! ...I have learned so much about the beginnings of the different Elves. ..one race so divided in so many ways ...loved the creation of the sun and moon... if you pick up this story again I will be here waiting. ..

I love the way you write the characters. When I read the snippet parts about Oropher in Interrupted Journeys I love his character and am happy that he's in a story with more of a spotlight on him. I hope you will add another chapter soon!

wow...WOW...this may very well be my new favorite! :)

I love it when the boys snickered about cultural differences... What princes, what lords. Boys indeed.

This was a very exciting chapter so I am glad you polished it up. :) I loved the meeting of the groups and all the name-play. :)

It is very interesting to read about these characters when they were young. I really like your version of Oropher.

That was unexpected and great! It's good to see Oropher, Engwe and the others in their youth... But I think I need a family tree with each of the characters in this chapter on it! (and I need to read the Silmarillion again, of course, but names are not easy to remember for me... it's worse when there are several names by character!)

I would love another chapter of this series... but I can't wait for Interrupted Journeys' next chapter. (I haven't written any review for a long time, but I read every chapter when it's released)

Thank you!

Celebriante.

I've always believed Thingol to be a terrible fool. It's good that you showed his intelligent and good sides in here.

Ah...Manarinde. Your version of the moon rising in Tolkien's universe gave me goose bumps.

I've readed it once, and I don't understand why I didn't add a comment... Stupid me..

Oh, well... Oropher is JUST as I thought! xD You didn't disapointed me... M... But still, Thranduil is the favorit... :)

I love the way you have shone a spotlight on the First Age, breathing life into the characters and making them believable and sympathetic. Excellent work.