it was nice, you should make a sequel for it in which it it in Kyo's P.O.V. after he begins to fall for Tohru

The last 3 sentences were so wonderfully beautiful! ja ne!~

Perfect last lines make for altogether perfect fics :) And very interesting POV's make for I LOVE THIS TO DEATH. 3

Excuse the lack of proper sentence structure XD

um, i think you should cotinue.

i really like it.

hey there. just decided to drop by and read this, really fantastic! i really loved the quote, "Kyo was my weakness as well as my strength." that was just beautiful.

Wow, this is dark and wonderfully twisted. I like it very much. :)

Isa

You took a very realistic approach to how Yuki feels about Kyo and how he feels about himself. In fact, most authors just take Kyo's side because they favor him and see him as suffering more. Anyways, good job and thank you for stepping outside the box.

Aw, this is so cute and sad! I really like it; I think you captured his feelings on the matter well, and you have an excellent grasp of both characters (judging from the one line Kyou even had :) ). I enjoyed reading it because...it made me feel. _

AW! I think u should write a sequel with the two fighting, and Yuki finally spills how he feels to Kyo! Just a thought! Great job, never stop writing! _ XD

I like this. I think you caputred the inner Yuki perfectly

sad but sweet. cute. :)