Very good. You just say 'she' alot. or 'her' :/ still good :]

Hey read ur fan fic and it was good. i havent exactly read this book but from ur fan fic it seems pretty interesting.

I haven't read this story, but this is simplicity in this is interesting.

okay.

wow this story is realy nice i saw that you were the only one so i had to read it lovely is the word i give it have a nice day

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Dude! I totaly read this book. It's kind a sad. But you made a good point bby going to the girls side. I mean most of it IS with the guy. Well...the

hey, great job with you fic.

simple, yet to the point. :)

I was wondering, how were you able to create this subsection of books, because I too have written a fic and yet it has no subsection. If you could write back, that would be great.

Thanks and great job,

~eternal rose 45

Aw, that was so sweet!

I have no clue what "Cure" is, but I saw that your fic was the only one there, so I checked it out.

This is very poetic! It's really too bad that nobody has reviewed, this was beautiful, even if it was 'rated T for a reason.' I LOVE the last line, "She's found what she's looking for..." Really well placed!

~Chi_