Moore!

Oh tom… *crys*

Not beautiful, she's a Mudblood. She can't be beautiful.

And yet . . . She's all I want.

This fic was beautiful, so beautiful that I'm close to tears.

that is really good. i had always thought that maybe tom once felt human emotions, therefore, he fell in and out of love just like everybody else. i love how you wrote this. it would be amazing if you wrote some more...

short but sweet! Nice job and poor Riddle...

Very good for a very short story. This is like Flash-Flash fiction, but you really captured the struggle Riddle is facing. There is still some bit of good in him, I guess, where he is capable of feeling love. Too bad the evil part wins out.

Awesome job.

Story/Characters: 7.5/10. I like the idea of Riddle struggling with love, but somehow the way you do it seems a bit obvious or exaggerated. I think it would be possible to do this in a more subtle, nuanced way.

Creativity: 8.5/10. Like I said, really interesting idea for this character.

Writing: 7.75/10. It is well written in terms of being correct, but I think that your writing as well as the content could be more subtle.

Believability: 8.5/10. I can believe that this would happen.

Overall: 8/10. Nice idea and pretty well written, but a little obvious.

Professionalism: A. Everything seems in order.

Oh my! That was so wonderful, just the fic I've been looking for. Because even Tom needs some love ]

Very sweet, very wonderful, very in-character. Great job!

different, yet in a good way. Thanks for the review girl. Working on next chapter right now.

I loved this brief snapshot of Voldemort trying to stifle the more human aspect of himself. You portrayed this struggle wonderfully. It's interesting- you can almost read the italics and normal text as two separate things.

I thoroughly enjoyed this. You have a clean style and write with extreme lucidity. I didn't spot a single error in spelling, word usage, punctuation, etc.

Awesome job on this!

Remus! This is funny, sounds like Moldiepants is arguing with his shoulder demons! Word up!

~Muses~

Me likey. i was just wondering if this is a one shot or will it be more than that. i hope more.