you're so creul i'm crying wah

It was so pretty!

And I liked it very much.

Wow, that was incredibly deep. I loved it!

wow. this was an amazing poem; full of love, passion and a touch of sadness too.

i think that this piece shows lyra's thoughts very well and will's thoughts too.

very well done.

it's very nice and very romantic

You love reviews, I will give you reviews. Very, very, very good. Really accomplished writing, well done. You got the character's feelings spot on. Nice.

Incredible. This is amazingly well written, and I would love to see more from you in the future?

I especially liked Will's part. It was ringing true to the things I think he felt.

Again, I loved it, and would love to see more.

Well I've already told you how amazing this poem is but I'll say it again. AMAZING! I absolutely love the imagery. I'm so glad I got you into the HDM trilogy so that now you can write more wonderful stuff like this :)

Wow. I loved it. So good. So true. You NEED to write more HDM stuff. Please?

Anyway, like I was saying, I liked this a lot. The words seemed to flow well and I got into it easily. It really seemed to capture Lyra and Will and the way one feels after they are torn from someone they love. Bravo, my friend. Please keep writing- I love it. Thanks!