This is really good, I feel like this is exactly the way she would admit her emotions and urges to him, yet also tell him that she is skeptical of his fidelity. I really, really like this one.

Mm. I like.
Nanao and Shunsui are so cute.
/faints
xD

Wonderful. Love the fact that she knows his truths and he knows her unspoken questions.

ah... beautiful shippy at the end of a tiring day.

*shun-nao love* Swons

This was *beautiful*. I love those last three lines.

Hotness XD

that was very sweet.

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D.

that was lovely,

i think you got nanao's fears balanced beautifully with her feelings for shunsui

I loved the mirroring between the opening and the ending

well done

keep writing

Beautifully written one-shot.

~Matahari

Oh, that was adorable! *sighs happily* Good job. _

Keep Writing!

~May

YES! For once someone got it right. I love how even after Nanao becomes intimate with her taichou, you don't turn her into a whiney little cow or completely change her personality. She's still kinda cold. Still aloof. Still considering the facts. Good job.

"She is not foolish enough to think herself the first.

She is not foolish enough to miss realising that she will be the last.

It is enough."

~ But then, there will come a time when she would be too tired to worry about when it would end.

Nice fanfic...just can't help adding that thought in...because just when you think it is enough, sooner or later, you would realize you want something more...humans, or if I say, even Shinigami, are by nature are insatiable.

Wonderful characterization. And nice flow of words. I like it when writers tell the stories through narration and not much dialogues...especially for those serious moments.

Adding it to favorites!

Aww! That was incredibly sweet! Thanks for writing this!

SO SWEET! AND AWESOME! AND JUST... JUST... SO COOL!

You take raw emotion and fashion it into a well-written vignette. Very well done.