CUTE AND FUNNY IN SOME PARTS

Greetings, Whinnie.

This was a lovely read. I like Sonamy, and with this story you managed to capture some of the gentler spirit of the pairing (not that violence we're so used to). It's a nice change. And as a bonus, it was steady and well written, with a good pace. Fabulous work!

You're one of the few authors out there who actually get the whole concept of good fanfiction. I look forward to seeing more from you. Keep writing!

PS - thank you for reading 'Chocolate'. That was really sweet of you, and I hope my review made you smile too.

Heh heh. I made a rhyme.

-1Past and Present1-

lovely stoire write more plz

A little sweet romance goes a long way. Good job on the story. It was a nice, happy story, and I like those. Good job.

First off, I just wanna say: AWWWWWW! :)

Anyway, after reading one of your other stories, I just had to see what else you had. I saw this, and I was not disappointed. Even at the beginning of the story, I couldn't help but notice the way you described the light. A less experienced writer might have just put "It was bright." and just left it at that, but you truly showed me, through words, what it was like. You are very good at describing things, and I have to say, that's a very good skill for a writer to have.

I could ramble about this story for ages, but I want to read another one of your stories too, so I'm just going to end the review here. Once again, I just want to thank you for writing this gem :)

This story is so sweet, cute, and romantic in a grown up way. I love how you related it to a real life situation between you and shadowmaster7799, by the way is he fan of something that has to do with sonic or shadow or is just a name? Anyway, I hope that when I'm older, I'm 13, I find someone just like you did! Congrats by the way!(3

This story was very nice. I really love the SonAmy relationship, and of course, I'm starved to find great pieces of work like this. I like it when they confess their love in the fics, but I guess I'm being idealistic. Can't have that all the time...

But again, wonderful story, and touching ending!

S: Inspired by true events? I'm really happy for you!

It was excellent, usually SonAmy is slightly false because, well, most of the time, Sonic doesn't like her for being such a fangirl. But you presented it as if they separated, and then got back together when they were older. I think SomAmy only really works if Amy is old enough to realise what an annoying person she's being.

A touching oneshot, definitely on my favourites list!

Very nice, I like this story, especially since it's based on a true story, were you with another author or is that just his screen name? I like you, not in that way, but as a fellow author. I invite you to read my story, A New Family. Keep it up!

AW! THAT WAS CUTE! CONTINUE THE GOOD WORK!

That was so cute!

Ya, thanx for sharing :)

Aww that is so cute!

I mean, come to think of it, Sonic/Amy is one of very few "canon" and obvious couple pairings I actually like, out of cartoons, movies, shows, etc. that I like and watch.

Once again, very cute and adorable. Good job!

Hey, i usually hunt for sonamy fic but you're fic was one of the unique one. Although i did quiet confused with Amy's reaction but you then make each of the characters doing what logically do (it is very wise you didn't make sonic crippling) My favorite part is, sonic's part with jet for no particular reason. Perhaps, it's very rare to find a fic where Jet was there to give advise (and the answer was kept in simple, perfect!)

nice story, and it made me shocked in the middle to read that this actually happened. Thanks for thinking of me!

-Shadowmaster7799 _

Aww. How cute is that! WRITE MORE!