Hi!

This has been one of the best fics I've ever read! It has a really good plot and a great character development, it also has a really nice narrative structure (pleasing and understandable); which it's not easy to obtain...

However, my only "critic" would be the unanswered question in the final battle...Who came out of the vortex caused by the Shaolin? Was it Cologne or Shampoo or someone else? If so...Do you intend to answer that in a secuel or as a compaigning oneshot?

Anyway...I'm really happy with the story and I'm eager to read some more of your stories.
Keep up with the good work!

Absolutely love your story ! It’s so hot, steamy and amazing ! I really adore Ranma and Akane, thanks for writing and sharing the story!

Ah what a feeling...awesome..2ND time reading this but still it amazes me how beautifully it's written..thank u

Love love love love loved it! Thank you for this awesome story! Jin felt like he had been part of the story all along. Very well done on his character creation. Also really liked all he use of Ki's. Wish Mousse had gotten a happy ending somehow, but glad he finally stood up for himself and fought his tormentors. Wish there was more time to absorb Ryoga's revelation to Akane, but I felt good about that as well. Will there be a sequel to this? Would love to learn more about Jin and his tribe.

Loved how you did the chapter on him gaining control of the Neko-ken

I don't think you could have possible done a better job on the scene behind the dojo...simply wonderful and I agree with your prereader about needing to open some windows

probably not gonna see this but im gonna say this anyway. this fic has the best characterization like no one is out of character. Except maybe moose but it not like way out there

yessssssss, i ship it so much *cough*so ran and shampoo don't u dare come back*extremely long an loud cough*

Here's another comment for you, not that you need to worry, but I just wanna say that I love the amount of effort and detail you put in. You made this story interesting and kept them all in character. I love this fanfic already!

Sorry, for ruining your perfect 500 reviews, but that's one step closer to the thousand review you deserve. I usually get bored with so many thick paragraphs, but this was amazing for a first chapter. Good job:)

WOWWWWWWWW THAT WAS AMAZING! I'm so conflicted between feeling happy for finally finishing it yet so sad now that it's over Y_Y I don't want to make this review too long, so I'll try to keep everything brief even though there's just so much to say. I absolutely loved your Ranma and Akane, their love for each other is so intense that you can feel it! It's a beautiful love, and I loved how Ranma got jealous and possessive! I don't care what feminists say, that's just freaking hot and a must in any perfect fanfic lol. And even though Shampoo and Cologne aren't actually as evil as portrayed, I understand it was a must for the story! They were downright vicious and deserving of what they got. Especially for what they did to poor Jin ): Whom I loved! I don't usually like OC's, but Jin immediately won my heart. I loved how he saved Akane and was immediately caring towards her. Madw for a great jelly Ranma heheheh. And I knew Ryoga could never betray Akane, that'd be wayyyy too ooc, it just wouldn't be Ryoga. I felt so bad for him when Shampoo kicked him into a wall, authors usually make Ryoga out to be a bad guy, but he's really just... not the brightest piggy lol. Btw didn't something come out of the portal and rushed into the trees? I was worried that was Shampoo or Cologne :s Must've imagined that, it was prtty late. I also loved how you made Nabiki a much more caring sister. I thought she might end up with Mousse, but I guess not, poor Mousse never gets a happy ending in these fics, but more of a realistic one hehehe. Something I have to mention though, the fight scenes were ABSOLUTELY RIVETING. I'm never one for reading fight scenes, and tend to skim over them (or skip at times), but yours was so good that I read them all. They were way too good! Well, I'll end the review here. Thanks for the awesome ff!

ay me encanto esta historia de verdad es genial tiene de todo de verdad es muy bonita

Even though I know Akane survives, it's still too painful to see Ranma in such agony. It hurts to imagine his pain, I'm tearing up ))))':

*fans self* Goodness... this is just so freaking hot and erotic... Every Ranma and Akane scene is so perfect, and just leaves you needing a cold bath (or some sweet release). You are a master! And I love that you're building us up and teasing the hell out of us, it's definitely going to make what we've been waiting for soooooo damn worth it! Ugh, I really want to draw the scene where Ranma's fingering Akane ixkdbdnfokebdm

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