Is there another story in this series? Please say yes, or that there will be!

Ahh another cliff hanger - I love your writing - thank you so much for writing these amazing stories about one of my favourite couples... Thank you!

This is amazing! So bittersweet, gahhh! Omg I nearly died when Jess said it's okay for Rory to call him. And that cliffhanger! I like to think he's unable to leave and Rory tries to persuade Jess again. God please let these two be happy, amen.

Why did you waste your time writing this bullshit? Jess would never turn Rory down! He loves her and wants to be with her especially now that the timing is right! What's wrong with you sick and twisted bitch?

I think this was very true to the couple. They do know each other and love each other but they've hurt each other too. This was honest to the couple's core.

No! I need more! what happens? you are an awesome writer!

I really love your story, i have read the first part and now this one, i haven't looked to see if there is a third i hope so.

Sequel?

No, seriously, you absolutely CANNOT leave it just like THAT. There damn well better be another one! I will be most severely put out. They're finally at a place where they're honest with each other about where their headspace is, and if you don't write a sequel, even just another oneshot, I might have to. And I really don't want to, because the quality of my writing (well, my fanfic writing which I never put all that much of my soul into, anyway) can't compare with yours. You put your whole heart into this fanfic thing, and it gets incredible results.

So this is me, begging and pleading for a sequel, as I totally understand your unwillingness to write one for A Gradual Descent. On the other hand, there may already be one, so I'm going to go look...

God, good. Really liked this. I think Jess was my favorite out of Rory's boyfriends. And I love the ending because it can go either way. Fabulous job here.

-honda

fifth time reading it and it still brings me to tears.

"He holds her tighter, arms wrapped strongly around her back. “I love you, you know that? I have never said that to anyone else. Not yet.”"

that line gets me every time. you write Rory and Jess so true to their characters it's astonishing. I know I've said this before, but I can really see this happening between the two of them in the future, and in my mind an encounter such as this does take place. I'm so happy that you provide all of these one-shots between the two to fill in the blanks of how they end up together in my mind.

What a beautifully written story, you are amazing!. I really would hope you could finish it, we need to know what happends next! please write more.. I love Jess and Rory together, they are truly meant to be. please write, (and one just for good luck), please write!

What happens next? i really don't like cliff hangers, so please either write another one shot or tell me what happens.

sorry that sounded really rude. i'm not normally like that, but i really hate cliff hangers. so if you decide to write a third one shot that would be great. and sorry again for sounding so rude to being with.

the story is great by the way, going to your home page made me realize that i've read some of your stories and never reviewed them, and i would like to let you know that they were great.

dmhgfanatic

I don't know if you plan on adding another oart to this, but I'm putting it on alert just in case! I've been going through tonight, reading all of your work and I can honestly say I haven't stumbled across one story I didn't like. You are a terrific writter. You stories have depth and layers and you actually give your characters feelings and emotions and not just leave them 2 dimensional. I can't wait to read more of your fics :)

Melissa

wow.. great

wow.. why can't these two just be together..

i've practically read all your work yet i haven't read this.

loved it!

hopefully there's more to come..

does he get out of the car?