Actually, the act of releasing chakra out of your own body is a Hyuuga-only kekkei genkai. (Narutopedia said so). But I will overlook that for the sake of NaruHina.

Shame to see this never continued

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Although this was never finished, I have to glad to say that this is a great AU with a good beginning for Naruto and Hinata to fall in love.

I love this fanfic.

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Hey, I realize you're really busy with college and stuff (frankly, so am I, lol), so this isn't a prod to try to get you to write beyond what you want and can do while maintaining your GPA.

That said, your writing is witty, intriguing, well-planned, and (hell, I'll say it again) witty. It's funny enough to keep the reader going through the otherwise "boring" parts of the plot. In two days, I've read three of your stories (ORE, TBH, and SoAS) and I love them all. If I had more time, I'd volunteer to see if I could wrtie up possible plot ideas for where you've hit a block just to see if that could spark any fresh ideas. Anyway, fantastic stories. Great writing style. I love how you twist certain parts of canon, but stick to the rest of it (like going through the Genin exams in SoAS and the Zabuza arc in TBH). It's a fun twist for the reader, yet it still gives us something familar to watch.

Thanks, and good luck in college!
Ikunasu

Aweee so cute!
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Wow...pretty sad...you left hundreds of loyal readers hanging. My GPA is important to me too...but if I had a story like this going...I would damn sure finish it. Good job with what you wrote here.

Very fun chapter to read...very well written and funny in what happens to Naruto and Hinata at Shino's place. Cool chapter.

Another great chapter. Superb ideas in getting the relationship between Naruto and Hinata on the fast track...and kind of funny with the mother involved:)

This chapter rocked! It was sure no letdown...great job bringing it all together so well...well written and exciting.

Super chapter! The scenes with Naruto and Hinata are great...just as in the manga this couple does seem natural together. The battle scenes are also super...Naruto is so strong and cool as he pounds the enemy ninja.

I am very surprised at the teams you put Hinata and Naruto on. I will read on for a while to see where you go with this but ...I really don't like the idea at this time...I'm going to give it some time.

Wow! A lot happened in this chapter. I like the extra ability that Hinata has and how strong and smart Naruto is here. Great writing and good ideas...I like your handling of Naruto and Hinata.