BEST. STORY. EVER!1

I am a huge fan of Mercury and this story really did her justice. I could not stop reading since you really did a great job to keep the suspense up. And the Outers are always a delightful bonus. Thanks for the great story. It's one of my favorites...

I am trying to think about why this story has kept me so drawn to it that I have lost track of time. I think it has to be everything unique about this story, but it took me at least twice before this story finally drugged me in. The details in this story is so marvelous and I love how much it played on the original canon. This fanfic is one I found while searching for more fanfics about Ami and Zoi. I never knew this fanfic was complete since it was never marked as complete on this website.

I really enjoyed reading this. The plot was really interesting and I have a soft spot for Ami so it was really lovely to read this story in her perspective! I thought all the characters were all really well illustrated and it was really lovely. Thanks for sharing and completing this, I know it was a lot of effort.

Awesome story! I so love how Ami's character developed. The adventure and her going into NVerse to retrieve her friends had me on edge. Reading this was worth the late nights, and er early mornings. You did a great job with this.

I actually cried with Ami when the crystal was formed. God, you're good at this. This story is the best of sailormoon I have read yet. Good job!

It took me a while to get through this story, but it was so worth it. What a great storyline. I loved how you made it from Ami's perspective, yet integrated the original story into your fic with the AU changes. I like how you tried to incorporate things from the five manga arcs into this story. It was a really nice read and very well done.

If there's anything to concrit about it would be that you could, perhaps, have slowed down when you wrote this, or proofread before posting. The many grammar errors and missing words were distracting and didn't do this story justice, considering your prose otherwise was fantastic and nicely descriptive.

But anyway, this was a long time ago. I'll just focus on the awesome story that it is and thank you for the great read.

I love your opening chapter- its so very much like Ami to love everything about winter. Your descriptions are very vivid, and it seemed like I was right there with her experiencing everything.

And what a mishap to get into! Serena and Mina certainly know how to bring about trouble; especially Serena. :P I like the way you've incorporated the girls' separate powers into the story already; it seems like they have a good handle on using them, except in Lita's case. Sure hope nothing blows up! :)

LadyZel

I really enjoyed reading this story, it was unique and I that the focus on Ami worked well. Although, I would love to see a sequel-whether is be a one shot or a full story, I really don't care- that shows more interaction with the shittenou and the other senshi. Maybe a short story with a chapter revolving around each pair? So five? Even if you don't end up writing a sequel, this was still a fantastic read.

I love this story! It was very well written and it kept me guessing. I kinda wish there were some more follow up chapters, like an epilouge? It would be nice to see the characters interaction in the aftermath of everything.

I do have to admit that you almost lost me when you kept putting Ami as the Moon Princess, cuz I was like its suppose to be Serena... But you put everything in the right and I love the way you uncovered everything! I 3 Ami and Zociste :-)

LOL, I'm not done with this chapter yet, but I really needed to comment this:

"the Senshi is not a religion. It is real." I really thought it amusing, since it's like saying every religion is a fairy-tale/myth/make-believe, etc...

an absolutely wonderful fic. Despite the errors in grammar and spelling, I found it to be engaging and interesting.

This is by far the most engaging and well-written story that I've read for this couple, despite the multiple grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. The plot is interesting, the language is fluid and appropriate, the flow is smooth, the words so well arranged that the entire scene plays out like a movie before your eyes, as though you're watching the events unfold personally just by reading it. I applaud you, and cannot help but to feel so proud of your acheivement of getting this far. I do not regret giving up my evening just to finish this story, even though I've quite a few obligations to attend to.

I'm very glad for Ami, she has truly found herself at last. I wouldn't have it any other way at all, even if I wish that Pluto was still here to celebrate with them.

By the way, if this story is truly completed, you might want to change it's status to 'Complete', because leaving like this makes one hope that there might be an epilogue to it. Please do inform me if there's an epilogue for this, I really want to read it.

Loved this! Wow-seeing Zoisite as good is a nice change...I'm having a hard time seeing him as a traitor, he acted way too human...He showed remorse and seemed to remember Amy. Something that confuses me...The generals's hearts were sealed away along with their memories? So how come Zoisite remembered Amy and there was some kind of bond between them nearly from the beginning?

As for Darien-he was more victim than villain. So I cannot hate him. Now I wish that something like this had happened in canon! I bet Darien would prefer to have his friends back, and not be the only male in that group...I'm certain that he gets overwhelmed sometimes...

Well. First. I must say I am very, very glad I came across this fic for the first time just a couple days ago, completed, because I would hate having to wait for new chapters. I have plowed through this entire thing in three days, given myself a near-migrane from staring at the computer so long, and can't regret it a bit. This was good stuff.

You've done a wonderful job reworking the canon into this AU, touching on nearly all the major points in the original and refashioning them into something both distinctly new and old at the same time. And the drama nearly made me tear my hair out several times. Ah angst. Oh Ami. And you can definitely write an action scene.

Yes, please do write an epilogue. Or a oneshot. You've done a really nice job of ending things on a fun, group-centric note, but a little bit of their further-along-the-timeline adventures. Couldn't hurt.

Do continue the wonderful writing!