This was beautifully written and very cute! I love how you show the complexities of Sesshoumaru. One of my favorites.

this chapter was amazing. i love how kagome was amused with sesshomaru throwing inuyasha out the window and his smirk. great job

I have no idea why it took me so long to read this, but I'm so glad I did! I laughed, cried, got irritated, and elated. Everything was fabulous. I am saddened by Kikyou, her story is always so tragic, canon and not. Thank you for such a fabulous fic!

“No car would dare defy me.”

Me: Screaming.

Okay so,
I remember reading this story when it was still a work in progress. Chapter by chapter I waited patiently and this story was everything and more. This was the story that forever changed my view, before this story I was a hardcore InuyashaxKagome shipper but everything changed when I started reading this fic. Now almost 12 years later this is still by far the best fanfic I have ever read. I still re read it at least once a year and even read it aloud to my best friend who has never watched a single Inuyasha episode ever (she loved it btw, she brings it up often). I had to post my comment on the first chapter cause I already left a comment on the last chapter lol.
So from the bottom of my heart I just want to say thank you. Thank you for this amazing story, thank you for posting it where I could read it, thank you for everything.
I hope you're doing amazing.
-Molly Who

This was beautiful I loved every minute of it.

Holy guacamole...
This is the best book I’ve read in a Long Long time! Like you’re writing just has this incredible power that makes you feel so many emotions! I love this!33

Yesssssss! I loved this chapter!

me encantó, lo amecomo describes a sesshomaru fue épico y kagome siempre dulce el final fue hermoso un gran fanfic gracias por compartir

I favorited this story a while back and suddenly I had this desire to read it again because it was so unlike the other fics and i’m so glad that I did. Your story is so utterly perfect with the internal monologues of each character and with the little bits of dialogue leading up to Sesshoumaru and Kagome falling in love. All the while, you showed tidbits of other couples and familial love... when Sesshoumaru told Kagome his story it really touched my heart. You wove the plot together so well, it was all so captivating I could not put it down despite having read it before. Enthralled from start to finish. Thank you

This was just lovely.

Yes, hi. Something's missing alright. If you felt like something was missing BEFORE you wrote this chapter, you can be 100% positive that anything was missing after you wrote it. WHY would you jump from them kissing on the floor, to kagome reflecting on his proposal to mate and his desire to never let her die. That's a pretty IMPORTANT scene you scarcely even acknowledged. I was so confused I had to go back and reread the last chapter to make sure I didn't accidentally skip something so important. I didn't. That was very poorly executed. Sorry, but it's true.

You said you changed the rating on this story to a K but I still see M.

Hahaha! I loooove their banter

Ok, you keep saying "heritage" where you mean "inheritance," and "translated" where you mean "transferred," among several smaller mistakes... BUT, that being said, I recently saw an A/N from you in which you stated that English was not your first language. With that in mind, I have to say, your writing is IMPRESSIVE. Truly. Despite a few incorrect terms and very minor grammatical errors, overall your English grammar is quite good. This is a great story and I do love reading it.