| Reviews for Imperceptible |
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   WritingRin chapter 99 . 7/15 Oh, no. That was so sad! |
| WritingRin chapter 92 . 7/15 Yes! The TREE gets it! Hahah |
| WritingRin chapter 90 . 7/15 That was really... really cool |
| WritingRin chapter 83 . 7/15 Oh that’s very neat! He would do that! |
| WritingRin chapter 63 . 7/15 Okay girl NOW are you crushing? Cuz I am. Him waiting for her in the well, now this. My stomach flip flopped too! |
| WritingRin chapter 53 . 7/15 That was AWESOME. |
| WritingRin chapter 17 . 7/15 It’s so precious. My little heart! |
| WritingRin chapter 14 . 7/15 I always enjoy Shippou’s pack instincts. And in this one I enjoyed him and Inuyasha teaming up! |
| WritingRin chapter 11 . 7/15 Oh what a game. It’s a good game |
| WritingRin chapter 10 . 7/15 I’m giddy! I love this chapter! |
| wow chapter 100 . 7/10 omfg, i'm SO glad that i'm not the only person who got to this chapter and thought it was super random and nasty that we find out rin and sesshoumaru were fxcking. if i'd known there was parent/child sex i wouldn't have touched this fic with a ten foot pole. which is really sad, because i genuinely enjoyed it and was touched throughout the 99 chapters before this...weirdness. you legit could have paired sess with anyone else and i wouldn't have cared. i've got no issues with him loving other people or having kids and other relationships. but the fact that you had him end up with Rin just reeks of sexual grooming and an abuse of power of a victim with no where else to go and no one else to turn to. sesshoumaru and rin both deserved better than that. I'd heard that in Unspoiled you paired a child sess with an adult kagome so i didn't read it, but there was absolutely no warning for this in an author's note or the narrative itself. so i just wasn't prepared for this...this. |
| Guest chapter 100 . 6/29 This was a very beautfully written story. Thank you for sharing. |
| Pokopi123 chapter 100 . 5/25 Love the ending of this! Thank you for writing yet another amazing piece. |
| Pokopi123 chapter 79 . 5/24 Cute chapter! |
| Roxana Miranda chapter 100 . 5/15 I'm read this fic one more time, again, i'dont believe , i liked so very much. I'm chilean so my english is bad, Tu historia me ha encantado mucho, desde que empece a leerla que me gusto y ya la he leido mas d veces, es una de esas historias que te mueven a seguir leyendola y que no paras hasta que la terminas. es una de mis favoritas, desde que empece senti al leerla que era diferente a otras, tu forma de escribir le dio un giro a lo que es el anime o la historia de inuyasha en si, la forma en como planteaste la personalidad de sesshomaru fue increible, le dio un giro al papel que realizo y lo mostraste como alguien en proceso de cambios me fascino, gracias por escribirla y espero que estes bien saludos y cuidate, |
