| Reviews for Lost Souls |
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   EdwardBellaRenesmeCullen chapter 16 . 12/31/2016 Damn wasted time read this shit crap. You shouldn't label Bella and Edward. Eww want to throw up stupid bitch Bella should dies. Bitch Bella and ugly nasty stinky Jacob ugly nasty paring ever. I don't think this is romance at all when that stupid ugly bitch Bella don't want to marry edwar. Wish at bitch die in million pieces. |
| cfigueroa78 chapter 16 . 5/9/2014 I have no idea what happened in this epilogue. Edward marrying Tanya, then he's at lapush, then werewolves appear, then Bella is marrying Edward, not marrying him. Was this a story? |
| cfigueroa78 chapter 9 . 5/9/2014 This story is all over the place. There's no fluid storyline - it's jumbled. The transition between scenes with the Volturi, Bella's weird family, Denali. I feel like I'm reading a riddle. |
| ASMI12 chapter 6 . 1/30/2014 Oh no, Alaska , she is going to meet Edward or Tanya |
| Marsbars chapter 17 . 2/18/2012 Okay story. Still can't believe you killed jacOb, but loved the ideas of her kids. You should do one about kat and derrek. |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 14 . 3/17/2011 Another excellent chapter |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 13 . 3/17/2011 another excellent chapter |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 12 . 3/17/2011 another excellent chapter |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 11 . 3/17/2011 another excellent chapter |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 10 . 3/17/2011 another excellent Chapter |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 9 . 3/17/2011 another excellent chapter |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 8 . 3/17/2011 another excellent chapter |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 7 . 3/17/2011 another excellent chapter |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 6 . 3/17/2011 another excellent chapter |
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 5 . 3/17/2011 another excellent chapter |
