Too bad it's over. I liked it.

Always so God damn dramatic about his fucking burritos. Anyway... Thank you for not making Johnny lame in the fabrics and making him head over heels and dull as fuck like other authors usually try to do. You also seem to be highly intelligent as it is clearly shown in the knowledge you chose to give Johnny in this story. I still haven't found a single mistake. I just really hope this doesn't turn all romantic and shit or I will honest to God or whoever fucking slam a knife into the wall by my bed. Also, are burritos suddenly a super food? I really need to eat some now, might improve my memory, and maybe my hand eye coordination. My aim could really use some work too now that I think about it... Whatever. I gave you the long was comment you wanted. So...I've reached out to at least one person this year. Yay

Just the beginning, not even the story. Was amazing. It's exactly how I felt when I started reading Jthm. That's how I feel when I enter any fandom. You just captured it perfectly and eloquently. The story itself, though I've only read the first page so far, is nicely written without mistakes and is told quite brilliantly. (I sound way to formal) Can't wait to read the rest of it.

What ever your decision, I just want you to know that I had fun reading this story.

OH SHIT HAHAAHA you have NO idea what you've gotten yourself into, girl. Telling people Jonny raped you? Jesus.

Oh man, does she really think Jonny gives a shit what people think of him?

The fact that you're probably never coming back to finish this fic almost physically hurts me. It is so rare to find fics where Johnny is written so perfectly. You also did a great job with Audrey. She well rounded and unlike most ocs isn't written in a way that seems to suck attention from the canon character(s). I actually found myself becoming concerned with her well being. I hope you're out there some where writing books with excellent characterization. You have skills that some professional authors seriously lack

I wish you'd continue this. I love it. It's perfect. Please say you'll continue it.

so i read this fic for the first time, like, three years ago or so, and just found it again thirty minutes ago, and i have to stay that i still love it every bit as much as i did the first time around. this is probably one of the most excellent fics i've ever read, seriously - your characterization is spot-on, and you've written such life into your OCs, and i really want audrey to have some sort of epiphany and not get /with/ johnny, not really, but, like, kiss him and then finish the project and lose contact with him, like he stops talking to her after they're done or something. i don't know.

i'd really love for you to finish this, although i totally know how it is with school and social lives and shit factoring into fanfic, and how it gets so much harder to pick up on a muse four-odd years later. ;)

um also this is the first review i've written without an incoherent keysmash in about five months just saying

Ah, that moment when you find a story you enjoy. At first, you may be distrustful, yet curious. But then, you smile, your stomach feels so pleasant, and you just feel lighter. That's the feeling I got. It's really not all that often I get a feeling like that when on an amateur author site.

And, you did the impossible! You managed to make an OC I ACTUALLY like! Good for you! Even when the OC isn't romantic, I tend to just despise them. No, I'm not saying I like cheerleaders, I'm saying this is an interesting character.

And another reason to like you? Johnny is -and no, I'm not being a kiss up to try and flatter you- completely in character. Even with some of my favorite stories, this can not be said. You describe his facial expressions, bipolarism, and his abnormality to a T. You get a pat on the back. Pat pat.

But sadly, I have to rape you maliciously now, seeing as you haven't updated in so long. Kinda left me wondering what else would happen, but I can pretty much guess from this point on. It's a shame you haven't finished it, seems like most of the GOOD fanfictions I find are incomplete. Oh, well.

Smiles,

Miss Anonymous

You have no idea how much time I have waited for this story to be updated. I've been obsessed with it for over three years. It's my favorite story ever. EVER.

It's so different from all the others. And Johnny is perfectly described.

I know it's ridiculous and exaggerated, but I sometimes wonder if you died. You know, because it's been so long since you've updated. And I have the certainty you'll never do it from now on.

I'm really sad about this.

Truly sad.

So it's been... four years since you've last updated? I am pretty sure you won't read this, but I'll still write. This story is amazing, I actually like your OC, Nny is perfectly in character, and... Oh God, why, why didn't you finish this story? Please, if you are reading this... do something. Update. How am I supposed to live not knowing what happens next?

Hello,

It's been two years since I put in a reveiw. It's been about four years since you updated.

I am no longer new to JTHM and I still love this story. You never fail to keep the characters in character. And I have to love the absolute insanity that is slowly taking over Audrey. I also like how even though she is not a canon character she is believable and fun to read about.

This story is fun and interesting. I've learned quite a bit about the terms for your chapters too.

Even if you never get back to this story, or even ever read this reveiw I just wanted to put out into the world that I really do love this story and think you are a fantastic writer.

Hope you are well,

}-cupid-

I am completely new to JTHM but, I love it. I also love this story for the odd moments of insanity and how interesting it is. I love the chrachters and how you are slowly developing them from the begining. I like the growth. I like the chapter names and the length of each chapter is perfect. One thing I do not like however is how long it's been since you've updated! :( I would absoulty fucking adore to read more of Nny's and Audrey's story but, am at a loss because it's been four years since you've updated. I know that you probaly won't update this and I'll forever be put on a cliff hanger and I'll die horribly never knowing what happend. I'll be old and decrpid and crying because I don't know the end. Sad face.

I LOVE this story.

Still waiting for an update of this lovely story. Hope you're well.