Reviews for Unpredictability
mysticblu19 chapter 1 . 8/2/2016
I already read this 5 times but still it makes me all kilig with naru and mai scene specially our boss getting jealous o.m.g love it...hope u can write more of this...
TReneeM chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
haha thats hilarious lmao awesome loved it.
NoxPerpetuo chapter 1 . 8/10/2015
It made me laugh, but the end seemed rushed. Like, "Oh! No! I don't want to write another chapter! So... um... and then they kiss. The end!"
girl.az2001 chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
jajjaja me encanto espero mas fanfic de esta pareja
FireStarRD chapter 1 . 4/1/2015
Naru! Ing he middle of the STREET? In PUBLIC? Have some class, will you? ;-)
Radioactivity.47 chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
That was beautiful! I love it when any guy is jealous, but jealous Naru is so cold and cruel that you can't help but fangirl! But the title and ending ties wonderfully together. It was awesome!
fairy tail-cedes chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
I loved that so much it was amazing! Well thought out to I could just imagin everything. You have amazing writing skills, and thanks for such an adorable story!
The Cowardly Mechanic chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
That was hilarious. Naru is not even playing! Great story!
jk chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
I enjoyed reading this :) good stuff!
Naruisawesome chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Heh, heh! Yasu, I've never loved you more! Lol.
ChristmasEveBrat chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
So funny
Miss KuroYuki chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Hehehe! never expect that Lin-san will be betting with yasuhara . I Love the story by the way! It's funny cause Naru lost his coolness.
Yumemi Sayaka chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
haha cute :)
julietsamuel chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
HI
Hello my dear compliment ,i am juliet by name i will like you to contact me through my private email adress

()so that i will show you my pictures,please do not write me back here hope to read from you,

yours juliet
marie chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Awww XD cute , and poor lin-san , if he didnt bet he woouldnt have that 10,000 yen X)
64 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »