AHHHH I LOVE THIS

Huh. I like this new view of Nanao's induction to the 8th division. I like how conflicts arose, but she and he finally began to understand each other, forming the spectacular partnership we see in the anime and manga. I especially like how Shunsui was at first a flirt and totally disregarded her personal space, but later, he began to respect her distance and herself.

Please continue! I would love to see how their relationship changes in result of years working together.

NOOOOOOOOO! IT JUST STOPS!

Keep going! The suspense is killing me! I need to know what happens next! :-) This is awesomely funny.

It's funny how bewildered Nanao is :) She's so cute

This is awesome! I know it's been... a while... since you updated, but I really do hope to see some more of this in the future. Your characters don't break personality at all, the storyline so far has been perfection, and I couldn't ask for a better start. Thank you for all you've done so far!

I'm lazy, so I didn't login. Anyways, I think I've reviewed this story before, but I can't honestly remember. So I wanted to say that I love this story, and hope you can put some thought into an update. I would love to see it continued, it's just wonderful. The slow dynamic between those two is perfect. Don't give up on this, it's great. I'm in a writting funk myself, so I feel like a hypocrite even asking. So, good luck to you, I hope you! I hope to see more, of this one or any others of yours. :)

Please continue!

Funnily enough, she IS a kidou master! Good for you for predicting that before Kubo revealed it! Loved this chapter; loved the fight and Shunsui's effect on Nanao!

I just...I-I-

loved this.

That's all there is to it, really.

You probably wrote this before Kubo revealed Nanao had known him since she was a child, but I love what you've done. Everything is so Shunsui, so Nanao-chan.

On to more chapters ~

UPDATE! THIS STORY IS TOO GREAT TO LET GOOO~!

Well well well...IT was quite long since you updated this wonderful story...I like it very much. Well I like all your stories but it's beside the point. What I wonder is are you planning on continuing it. Well IMHO it really is worth it. And it was starting to get really interesting also..,

Nevermind you probably won't even read this..,but you are my favorite fanfic writer :3

I adore this fanfic! Please update soon! I love it, it's the perfect way to spend the last night of my freedom before resubmitting myself to the captivaty of school.

~Kitty

please please continue with this tory, it's so fun so far.

How exactly is she going yo sell him to the others? I know I'll find out in a minute when I continue to the next chapter, but it frustrates me that I haven't got a clue before then. I have actually read this chapter thoroughly through twice before I wrote thisand still can't guess it

Oh, well there's a lot underneath the litteral meaning of the spoken words.