Loved the story! The writing and the detail in the story were amazing as well the plot. And the romance between Sam and Daniel was a really nice touch. I hope that you write more stories in the future with this pairing.

Great chapter and great writing. I'm really enjoying the original characters and loved how Finaias pronounced Colonel O'Neil (Kern'l O'Neel).

best lines:

Jack looked up to see two very tired, very dirty teammates smiling at him, their blue eyes the only thing not turned red by the dirt of the planet. He also noted how the female companion was trying to hide a smile, while her male companion sported streaks of smeared dirt across his mouth and his forehead and had his hair spiked with mud. Squinting, Jack eyed them up and down, then deciding that they were, indeed, his Sam and Daniel, he looked back up.

Teal’c, however, caught on quickly, surprisingly graceful and fluid.

At one point she looked up into his face when he thought she wouldn’t, and she caught a glimpse of something in his expression that sent a thrill of fear down her spine before it closed like a book and he was once again just Daniel.

Nice scene, the scientist and the archie playing in the dirt :)

best line:“Kern’l O’Neel speaks of great gifts. You have the greatest mind of all your people, are greatest artist of Earth, keeper of history and knowledge, speaker of many languages, finder of secrets, and one who understands great mysteries.”

Nice fic. For once, a tribe that doesn't attack them... I liked the scene where Dan and Sam are standing side by side in front of the local royalty, happy to have solved the problem and not noticing how mud streaked they are.

You are one of the better authors I've read on this site! I adored Hanging by a Thread and A Silken Thread. The culture is wonderfully authentic, the language perfect, and the customs, lifestyle, and manners of the people can't be better. The interplay between the members of SG-1 is great! Spot on! Oh, I hope you've written more like this!

very very good job! The description of Jack, Teal'c, Sam and Daniel's outfits were all beautifully done! I loved it! :)

God and peace

Vanessa :)

Nothing? Nothing! Come on, I'm curious now! (LOL)

Oh, and thanks for updating - lot's of chapters, cool!

I'm enjoying your story. Looking forward to the next update.

This is a great story, not sure why you felt the need to split it though. looking forward to more :)

Aliens speaking English much better than I do... I envy them!

LOL, it reminds me of the "Wormhole X-treme" episode.