Creepy as hell, and fascinating. Good job!

This is excellent! You've captured Sephiroth's character very well.

...Disturbing and very well written. Honestly I've never thought of what Sephiroth would've been like as a child, despite him being a favorite of mine. As creepy as this story is, I love it.

Creepy, and very well written. I have been reading through all your other fics aswell you have a very potent way of writing. Your characterization is wonderfull also. I love your take on Sephiroth in this, It all seem logical when you think about it. 'Growing up' in the lab he would have no idea about life and death as we all do today (thanks to school and the myrical of tv and the internet). It was a very good idea. I enjoyed reading this. Thankyou for writing it.

Wow that was morbid and terrifying; you successfully created some horror there. Some good imageries used too, although in some parts the sentences are too long and doesn't flow too smoothly. There's also a bit too much dashes used and this can break the flow of the story and affect the overall style.

Other than that, good job! I hope you continue writing!

"It might have been the ordered neatness of the laboratories in which he spent his childhood that caused him to seek out the temporary mess and horror of decay..."

I really liked that line. The way you can take two opposites and make them have great meaning is amazing.

This is incredibly well-written, but I expected it to be so.

i always see Litle!Seph as being more than slightly unstable.

haha. how could he not be?

excellent writing style, and descrpitions.

that was excellent... slightly disturbing alright,but fantastic. i really enjoy reading your work!

... WOW! That was really good skills in writing there. You showed so many little details that it was like you were there... WOW! I have to admit it was different, but not disturbing.(Well in my case. I know a few people that might be disturbed ') I loved it. :D