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OMG WHY?

*sobs*

But truth be told: applause! Very nicely done.

*sobs some more*

. . . .o. . .m. . .g. . .that was . . .really really . . .sad

i uh don't really know what to say . . . .um . . .it was good. . .till the end. . .with the crying and the hurting. . . and the heart break. . .well. . .uh. . .i think i need to go make a batch of sad emo cookies. . .yes i plan to eat them. . .but . . .this was really sad almost exactly how i would picture a horror film. . .

with sad love,

aira-chan

that's so cool! I know I shouldn't, but I can't help but feel sorry for Zexion :P

OH. MY. GAWD.

Do you know how absolutely AMAZING this is? It's spectacular! Stupendous! Fantastic!

You have a lovely plot here, wonderful spelling and grammer and you caught their personalities perfectly!

GREAT JOB~!

OMG...

-tear- that was sad!

i kno how Demyx feels my ex jus died

this is sad!

but a good story none-the-less!

*cries* that was my first horror fic I've EVER read. Very well written.

*blink* Axel is...dead? NO! HOW DARE YOU HURT MY DEAR AXEL! (this is a good review btw.)

You know what would have been cool though? Is if you legngthened and described the murder scene a little more. It seemed kinda short...yes, I know I'm contradicting myself. Shutup ;-;

Wow, that was very eerie and creepy, but I really enjoyed it.

I really like the last line of the story, I thought it summed it up well.

Good job! _

, X3, O_O...in that order XD

Really great story, the sex scene was different than your usual, and I liked it. Basing it around the lyrics to bloody Valentine kinda makes me wana rape u in joy... .

that was really sad but still good