Thanks, now I'm sobbing.
This was so beautiful.

Great story. You should do a little backstory on how all this came about. Its very interesting.

In the beginning it made me smile...

But when I neared the end... I actually had to hold back my tears! It was cute, but sad... Which is a wonderful thing that you can get in just over 500 words!

Awesome and greatly written...

That definitely pulled my heart strings

ohh it's so sad

but good

That was very beautiful. It flowed very nicely and had me smiling to myself though I was sad near the end, of course. Great work.

Gea

*cries* that was really well written and really sad

You make me 's beautiful.

It was almost too sad to read... Really good & well written:)