you can buy the novels on e-bay, as I remember !

but your OS was good !

I love this story! Very well written, your grammar is near perfect...Lillith is the least-known character in the story, and it's great that you are giving readers a chance to get inside her mind. Great job, keep it up!

-YS

I love those descriptions you had regarding the Methuselah's movements showing the Crusniks' presence during the war. The beginning stuff Cain preached about to his younger siblings and having them actually do it was well written. Lilith really does sound like a mother who knew her children/siblings well, her slight regret at not seeing the others grow up really drove that point in. And how she knew that the others would break up after her death (Abel being vengeful and Seth handling delicate matters best potential ruler/Empress), can see how this fits into the TB plotline.

For writing a one-shot the first time, I think you did a wonderful job!

That was so sad T_T

It was nice having Lilith observe her younger siblings, and placing her in a martyr yet human position. She knows them as well as any mother knows her children, her comment about the scientists (their creators) not knowing anything was a nice touch. The twins' individual reason as to why they won't kill was very well done, I could see that as an explanation.

The crisis she faced regarding her decision to join the Terrans shed light to her person. "Just to justify herself for placing that look of hurt and betrayal in her younger siblings’ eyes, with the exception of Cain. His eyes bore only anger…and hatred" was very well written. Then later at negotiations, when Cain gave her a chance to rejoin them but she refused and he killed her for, that gave some humanity to both of them. Cain did want her back, he's not a merciless killer, Lilith wanted to rejoin them, she's not all innocent and pure for the Terrans. That was...wow

I'll stop now before this turns too long, but this was wonderful, nostaglic(sp?), and sad. Very well written and excellent character interpretation going on.

wow! very very good! lovely thought piece!

I really liked the part where Cain spoon fed Abel! so cute!

But it was also sad - to see all this from Lillith's point of view... *sigh* It's great to hear from her POV - b/c, as you said, she doesn't really show up in the novels...

As for the novels, as I said before, the first novel just came out in English! It's really good - I own it myself! Worth the buy!

At any rate! hope to see you writing more Trinity Blood fics!

ja ne!

kakashidiot

this is very good xD