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Dont know why but for some reason your way of writing Naruto's character doesnt come out as funny but instead a mentally retarded fucking spastic. Whew, just had to vent. I like the premise of the story and I am also early in the chapter but it still just pisses me off. That's not to say you're a bad writer though.

Please continue it soon

Gai would not have enough chakra to make a shadow clone.

Sigue

Naruto is such a dumbass

For some reason, I just didn't feel any interest but your writing is good. Something was missing though and I just can't put my finger on it.

Good work. I like the way you focus on Naruto not improving in leaps and bounds. And changing the Lee's and Sasuke's story.

I really was looking forward in seeing Naruto learn shadow clone jutsu. I mean in days he can master any taijutsu form in seconds. Wind clones are pretty interesting idea though. The story was good read.

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oh I couldn't stop laughing between gai and kakashi's game and the part at the end with the outfits oh classic!

I like your story a lot, but i don't really think it's worth reading yet, you have a lot of errors and the characters are ooc, otherwise, great job and i can't wait for you to finish your re-write.

As good as this is, I was hoping for Naruto to learn taijutsu from Gai, like Lee, along with a little bit about ninjutsu.

Cool.

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