Your characterization of Sakura is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I love you author-san! And their relationship is not toxic at all!

this is so funny

Better than canon, even if it is unfinished!

*sighs* you should definitely continue this story. For some reason, I've always mixed up this story with Variance and I always thought this story was completed. I guess not.

Continue!

Damn ? Could've said discontinued or unfinished in the summary. :/ but then again I could've checked first. Ah well.

I really like this chapter. And I really really really like how you write lime. Even though it's not full-blown M-rated lemon, it's somehow just enough.

15 chapters in and still lots of "their - they're" & "your - you're" mistakes. I hope you'll find the time to fix those. I know this is an old story but it's really good! :) would be perfect if revised.

Good chapter. Glad Sasuke's slowly opening up. Cant wait for the background story involving Itachi.

Again, the issue with the "your - you're" interchange. And putting A/N in the middle of the story kind of ruins the vibe a little bit.

No biggie :)

Good. Minor mistakes that I noticed: you tend to switch your with you're, and their with they're...

Hey, how about putting the "unfinished" tag on your summary? I just wasted a bunch of time on a story with no conclusion. /Thanks for that./

I enjoyed your story! :)

im so disappointed so so so disappointed

But what about reliance!

Mou sasuke! You're unfair! Sakura obviously won.

Gasp...what is going on! Please update?