You know, the person who would understand this the most is Bulma. Like father, like son. In light of that, Trunks' behavior is not that weird. Goten embraced his human side, and Trunks is acting like a Saiya-jin. Vegeta was much worse. I have no idea if I'm right, because it's not Trunks talking here. Maybe humans and Saiya-jins just expect different things at first, and all they can do is hang onto each other until they figure it out.

I love it, aren't you going to continue it? It would be interesting

Nice.

I'm curious as to whether or not you still get these reviews, but I honstly hope you don't. Not that what I have to say is negative, just that, well, who likes to get comments on stuff they wrote almost 10 years ago? Ether way, here is how I feel about this.

Honestly, this is not my first time reading this fic, though I think that when I finished it the first time I was too unnerved to have anything to say. Quite probably I spent several hours afterward trying to forget what I read. That's not to say that the writing was bad or the story sucked. You write too well for me to even pretend like that statement has any merit whatsoever. But you captured the reality in this. Not the beauty, or the joy or anything that makes a person feel good. All I felt from this was fear. I was frightened at the complete monstrosity that Trunks had become, at the slow deterioration of Goten's self...in the end Goten says he is happy, that he found what he wants, but in truth he lost everything. This isn't a happy story. I was shocked to read some reviews and see that all the others who see this see rainbows and sunshine (of sorts) at the end of this. I am not sure what you intended, but all I saw in this ending was the death of Goten's soul, in the same way that he had wanted so desperately to change in Trunks'. He became what he had feared above all else. It was horrifc and terrifying. The stark reality of it shoved it in my face.

Please don't mistake me. This is not a flame at all, quite the opposite really. This was honestly, in large part, my reaction to the comments of others. For you to be able to capture truth like this...it is extrordinary. I appreciate your insight more than I can say. It just killed me to see the true depth of this story overlooked with comments on how great it was. It's not great, it's horrible. And that's what makes it perfect.

I'm curious as to whether or not you still get these reviews, but I honstly hope you don't. Not that what I have to say is negative, just that, well, who likes to get comments on stuff they wrote almost 10 years ago? Ether way, here is how I feel about this.

Honestly, this is not my first time reading this fic, though I think that when I finished it the first time I was too unnerved to have anything to say. Quite probably I spent several hours afterward trying to forget what I read. That's not to say that the writing was bad or the story sucked. You write too well for me to even pretend like that statement has any merit whatsoever. But you captured the reality in this. Not the beauty, or the joy or anything that makes a person feel good. All I felt from this was fear. I was frightened at the complete monstrosity that Trunks had become, at the slow deterioration of Goten's self...in the end Goten says he is happy, that he found what he wants, but in truth he lost everything. This isn't a happy story. I was shocked to read some reviews and see that all the others who see this see rainbows and sunshine (of sorts) at the end of this. I am not sure what you intended, but all I saw in this ending was the death of Goten's soul, in the same way that he had wanted so desperately to change in Trunks'. He became what he had feared above all else. It was horrifc and terrifying. The stark reality of it shoved it in my face.

Please don't mistake me. This is not a flame at all, quite the opposite really. This was honestly, in large part, my reaction to the comments of others. For you to be able to capture truth like this...it is extrordinary. I appreciate your insight more than I can say. It just killed me to see the true depth of this story overlooked with comments on how great it was. It's not great, it's horrible. And that's what makes it perfect.

this story was absolutely amazing! your writting style is fantastic, the plot, the setting, the characters.. everything! i love how it was gotens pov from his lap top lol. i love how deep you made him go into describing his feelings towards everything... mainly trunks :-)

i know this story is like 8 years old lol but...

anyway awesome story :)

This is an old story, but I'm glad I stumbled across it. This is just spectacular. It's an interesting take on the characters, but it doesn't strike me as OOC. Brilliantly written.

Thanks so much for posting this.

wow it's so good. i love tru-ten yaoi stories. it fills me with such happiness for some strange reason. i'm sure if it's a good thing that i like this stuff. oh well it makes me happy and that's what counts right? well anyways i love your story/songfic keep up the good work. thanks

I just finished your fanfiction and I would just like to say it's amazing. I mean, amazing. The writing style, the plot.. I truly hope you write more Truten fanfictions. ~Sanna

The little converstaions at the end of each chapter are brilliant! This is SO one of my favorite G/T fics... one of the best and one of the few! You're an awesome writer, Juu, and even though you wrote this fic forever ago, I'm still readin' it and I still love it! _

Wow that was prety damn amazing. Different in more ways than i can describe. Inspiring to no end. Well done. Thank You.

Best FanFiction EVER

Against all better judgement, I read this damn thing through.I LOVED IT! Never trust first impressions. The music you chose: so very fitting. I give it a 10 of 10. And on a side note: this would make for an interseting hentai. :P

Why do I read this shit whn it only makes me cry? Hey, whatever, I'm planning to read on.

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