Reviews for Pause
Guest chapter 12 . 5/5
Pity you abandoned this story, it’s been so good since the prequel... you were nearly there too! Could have it wrapped up in three chapters or so; it’s so annoying for readers when writers give up on their stories...
Guest chapter 12 . 12/22/2019
I can’t believe you left this story unfinished. To me it doesn’t feel far from an end, maybe not the end you wanted, but an end all the same! You could probably have written two extra chapters and made a good ending and a great story overall.. I really feel so annoyed when good writers like you, who have so many followers, just abandon their story like if it’s nothing... it’s disappointing...
Guest chapter 12 . 4/6/2019
Hope you still update this. It’s one of my favs.
Emrys315 chapter 12 . 1/24/2019
Not gonna lie, this story makes me uncomfortable... But its like a car wreak, you cant look away.
Guest chapter 12 . 10/1/2018
I need tobknow tje next chapt! ;-;
Guest chapter 12 . 7/17/2018
This. Is messed up really it is it’s like watching Game of Thrones and the last 15 minutes... the power shuts off! I need, I need another chapter...come on!
Guest chapter 5 . 7/17/2018
Drum roll please lol
NattyJane chapter 12 . 1/20/2018
So are you ever going to do the third installment
Guest chapter 12 . 7/8/2017
I really love your story. Every chapter is so amazing. I keep on guessing what will happen next. Looking forward to it. Please continue the story.
alinefgs chapter 12 . 5/29/2017
Adorei esse capítulo por favor continua
Guest chapter 12 . 2/25/2017
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Lady Moiraina chapter 12 . 2/17/2017
NOOOOO! Where's the next one? I need it! I'm dying! I love your stories btw!
SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 11 . 10/23/2016
I really like this story. I hope you can finish this. You have a talent for writing and this story is very creative. I hope no one dies though. I like the NejiTen hints :3 update soon. I believe in you (BELIEVE IT!) HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Guest chapter 12 . 9/26/2016
Ow! 75k words and no ending? You are a meanie author-sama. Even though Naruto has ended, would there be a chance to see this fic end? It was a really well created one too. Or at least place a warning on the summary saying it's not complete :’-(
Shame chapter 12 . 3/15/2016
It is a shame this will never be continued or maybe it will it is really good
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