Reviews for Day Break
Dalya74 chapter 5 . 12/1/2014
Having my own fair share of crime shows, I totally lived through your story. It was so well done and made me jittery all over during the time reading and in between, which only took a day. ( I couldn't put it down! :P )
I started fangirling to my family about the story, I kept telling them the events from the beginning then when I got to the part where her family dies, all my siblings gasped, I of course smiled, amused at their reactions and knowing what would happen. As soon as I started repeating the previous day's events, they started to smile as well, realizing how the story worked.
Anyway, as Casey kept repeating the day I saw how complicated things were getting. I started feeling like this was bigger than Casey, and I felt bad for her, knowing that she has to go through this alone. The fact that she remembers is beneficial to her but also quite lonely. I also agreed to what she said about how since the days kept repeating, the only thing she feared was waking up to a tomorrow and not the same day again.
All and all, I of course enjoyed the Dasey. ( why else would I be here XD )
When she decided to go on the vacation with Derek I was freaking out! I kept imagining how she would feel if she woke up still in Maimi. But I did agree with her, she needed it. If not for Dasey then to at least to clear her head and think of a solution.
But then, there was no more "Next" button. ..
I hope from the bottom of my heart that you finish this story. Because I've read quite a few Dasey fics. ( After finishing the entire series one can only do so much. :( ) And so far this was one of the most amazing ones.
A very unique setting to put Dasey in.
I do hope that you are doing okay, and that you can finish the story. Good luck with everything in life. You have brought a stranger happiness, I wish you can finish that piece of happiness.

Dalya

P.S. a suggestion to where to go from where you are in the story, if you don't mind:
1- She wakes up still in Maimi. Then freaks out goes back Derek hears of parents death. She then tells him about her days repeating because she can't take the guilt. He gets angry, they fight. Her dad comes gives her more information that gives her a better idea on how to stop her family's death and the gang.
2- Or she wakes up back home, applies her idea of calling brennr but something goes wrong. So she doesn't get it right this time and tries another key element.
Peace out.
Dalya74 chapter 6 . 11/25/2014
I can't believe this is the last chapter! !
I've been walking around my house obsessing over this fic, and telling everyone around me the story.
And it ends here?!
Please, please continue.
It just can't end here.

P.S. Clearly I love the story. Job well done.
VampAmbsxox chapter 6 . 9/24/2012
This story is so amazing, any chance you'll be finishing it? it's just sooo good 3
Chaos Dragon chapter 6 . 7/19/2012
This is really entertaining. Is there any chance you'll be finishing it?
nn chapter 6 . 9/28/2011
Omg! I know it's been... AGES since you last updated but...

Could you at least post some type of an update, letting us know you're alive!
bloodshadows chapter 6 . 2/4/2009
hurry up and update! This is driving me insane not knowing what happens!
Skewlie chapter 6 . 8/12/2008
NO! You can't leave me hanging here! UPDATE PLEASE D
Hazel Maraa chapter 6 . 8/4/2008
OMG, I love this! Please update like right now. xD.

:D This is such a unique and unusual but totally awesome story and plot and it's so well written and I want more, gosh darn it. -whines-

So, please update soon, hey?

Cheers!

~Hazel*
wprincessannw chapter 6 . 7/17/2008
really good story so far! I hope you continue - but I can see how this would be a difficult story to write. I dont see how they are going to save their family! I hope you update!
bex81385 chapter 6 . 5/8/2008
You can't just leave it there can you? I desperately want to know what's going to happen next! Please update!
Epsilon Of New Lyrae chapter 6 . 4/7/2008
Nice, I Like the story.

The Personalities are a good fit, & I like the storyline itself.

Unique, hope ya continue it.

XD
tavisa chapter 6 . 3/24/2008
Awesome!
AkomiNarazaki chapter 6 . 2/24/2008
Okay, that was so sweet :D That's a great reason to start liking Derek, instead of the same ol' reasons people seem to use. I like that her reason is unique :]! *insert heart here*

Updated: 08-13-07

Please change that soon ]! I really love this story, despite how depressed I've been reading it. xD
AkomiNarazaki chapter 5 . 2/24/2008
I know you haven't updated in a while, and I still have one more chapter to read, but I gotta review on this one. I started tearing up when Derek had said this part on the voicemail:

"Casey but I want you to know that I’m so sorry. No matter what, we’ll be here for each other.”

I'm like "AW [" and I started tearing up. I hope you decide to update this story sometime soon. On to the next chapter! :D *wipes teary eyes*
Anduviel chapter 6 . 1/30/2008
OMG! This fic is awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter :) Keep up the good work and update soon!
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