This is wild. This is the very first fanfic I ever read. And here I am again. Just wow.

That was super sweet! I'm glad May and Drew stayed in touch and got engaged, but when I saw that part where Drew was on the train and May screaming his name, I broke. It was so cute and sad, I can't believe she went to Unova, but hey, it makes every time they see each other more valuable, and now they're gonna marry. Magnificent story! P. S. I LOVED ALLY! SHE WAS AWESOME! P. P. S. I loved the version of Solidad you put it, it was a great change!

I loved it maydrew 4ever!

Why does it have to be Max and Dawn WHY! I love
Pearlshipping can you change it to dawnash (PLZ)

This may be stupid but I father is Harley don't ask me why I don't why either I think that.

Incredible

I know that this was written many years ago, but out of all the fanfics I have read about these two, I have to say this was the best. I was engrossed and at times laughing so much I couldn't see anything. I enjoyed it and love how you did your pairing. I would never have thought of Max and Dawn as well as Solidad and Gary. You should totally make a fanfic matching these pairs, I know it will take time for you so don't feel you need to rush, but these are the pairs

Dawn X Kenny
Ash X Serena
Harley X Solidad
May X Drew
(pokemon ships include:
Buneary X Pikachu
Frogadier X Braxien)

This story has been lots of fun, exiting and sweet :) I am so happy Max and Dawn ended up together - never thought that shipping could be so adorable. Your last chapter was a perfect ending to the story :)

Good.

Wow nice story... loved it

This was an amazing story! I loved every bit of it!

This was a great story. Well written with a good plot. Good job.

This chapter was really creative but you shouldn't have evolved Tentacruel.

This is such a beautiful story! I love how well developed the plot and characters are. I enjoyed reading it and your writing kept me on the edge of my seat. Plus those Drew and May moments were adorable. You kept them in character very nicely while adding your own twist. Probably my favorite contestshipping story yet!

Yes! Please don't be dreaming. Please!