At least Naruto's last movie had a better chance of happening than what you wrote this is no better than the actual movie Naruto's last movie and next-generation you are a hypocrite

Love it

Great story.

this is, honestly, the stupidest thing i have ever read. and i've only read chapter one. grammar? punctuation? lack of logic in this story? damn. a waste of 2 minutes.

that was sooo cute i wish you made an epilogue or something but anyway great ending!Xd

I have a question, how is it cheating when a boy is hugging a girl beside his girlfriend?

Cute story

That's was ...AWSOME yup it was soo nice lovely story

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Ja ne!

nice story...

Aw! That was just sooo cute! This is amazing! LOVE THIS!

Go Naruto! *sigh*where was the romantic picnic that I was expecting? Ramen...well I guess that's just Naruto for ya *shrug* Liked the chaptero

yay! two of them proposed - i really like this story, great chapters. you write good, you know?

I'll try to be nice, but no promises. So I only read the first chapter, and I stopped reading. The plot's good, it's just you're writing skills need improvement. Punctuation is important, so use it. 'OMG'? Really? Using capitalization with every fucking word makes the story look like it's... I don't even have the word to say. You skipped most of the story on the first chapter. I'm not going to lie, this story is predictable. Very predictable. Sorry for all the mean things, but it's just bothering me.

I just finished your story and i love love love it! it has a really good plot to it!

and what is it about you and flashbacks dammit!