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o my gosh i love it so much yes just yes right a nother one pleas

LOVE THIS!

Sexy. The pairing of Remy and Jubilee is a bit odd at first...but I have grown to love it (especially after this)

~vg1654~

I liked it. I really did...but, I kinda noticed that...well, the story kinda leaned more on the Remy and Jubilee side...Anyways, good job!

super duper hotness!

i so love it...

Oh my goodness! I loved this! It was amazingly awesome! :D

I especially loved Remy/Jubilee 33

Never really knew Remy and just so happened to watch the new X-Men's movie.

Anyways, great job.

The only thing that would've made it better would have been having this in chapters (:

great fic! :)

Totally awesome!

Good Job

Cheers

AJ

Interesting...very interesting. I love Rogue and Logan, hell I love Logan anyway but him and Rogue together makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. I don't know about Remy and Jubliee though, I'm not really farmiliar with the show so I don't know. But I loved the story, I wouldn't have expected Logan to take Rogue any other way, its just the animal in him. It always speaks to me when I have time to watch the movies, which isn't often, he sort of reminds me of an old boyfriend I had once, not going to go there though. Anyway thinks for a great story, keep up the good work.

TiFfAnY

Whew! :femme fans herself:: Nicely done. Femme

more to add pleas

that was really good