Loved it! Beautiful right until the end. I wish there was more Tokyo and Japan and Ash learning about Japan through Eiji but I can live with this ending too. Thank you for writing this.

Why author, why? I really wanted Ash to experience Japan with Eiji. For someone who has written so thoughtfully and heartwrenchingly until this point, I'm really surprised by this melodramatic twist.

Ugh, I don't want this between Yut Lung and Ash but I also can't blame Ash for being delerious. Damn, you really have me in a bind here.

So beautiful. Just as beautiful as this moment in the anime...

Ooph, I never read the manga but I do appreciate how much life you breathed into Alex's character,

That letter was so well-written. It sounds incredible in-character for both this story and that character. I can't help but appreciate the slow, meloncholic pacing of the chapter too. It's so fitting.

thank you for this beautiful story...

Perfection that is my 2nd time reading in less then a week

Perfection

Moreeeeeeeeeee

Noooooooooooooo

Hope. Go get your hubby also author you should consider publishing this story on wattpad as well.

I do like some aspects of this fic. Like the whole moonflower thing is brilliant, and I loved the whole ordeal with Alex, Nadia and Sing trying to steal Ash's body. I'm not a big fan of the whole thing between Yut-lung and Ash but I dont hate it either, it was a somewhat nice touch of drama I guess.

But I'm not gonna lie, I dislike most of Ash and Eiji's characterization. Ash seems to be more selfish here than his canon self. He didnt seemed that much worried about what Eiji have been gone through. Assuming he and Eiji were about to become a couple. Ash being Ash I expected him to be troubled Eiji would be mad at him, for breaking his heart, worried that Eiji wouldnt want to see him ever again.

On the other side I understand Eiji's desperation and denial, but here he looked overly agressive in here.

And the streak of misunderstandings became tiring at this point. Not the good kind that makes you want to keep reading, but the just frustrating one.

Not letting Sing tell Lao about the truth behind Shorter's death only ended up with him getting stabbed. I would think Ash would be smarter than that. Also he trusted those people to help him with the mooflower mess, rhey saved his life, the least he could have done was tell them the truth.

Because I honestly dont get it. Why lie about going to see Eiji? To protect him? He basically planned for either him or Eiji ever come back. But what if Eiji wanted to go back? What if Eiji wanted to see Sing, Alex, Kong and Bones? What if he wanted to attend Charlie's wedding with Nadia or Max and Jessica's?

He would have to go alone so people didnt find out Ash was with him? And in what world would Ash let Eiji go back to new york alone? So then what he would manipulate Eiji into staying in japan forever?
That's not only a incredible dumb plan for an IQ 200, but its also selfish as fuck.

So I'm really sorry, I like the fic, I like the plot. But I absolutely hate this Ash. This is not the Ash I met and love in canon, and this Ash here? He does not deserve Eiji. At all.

I'm sorry for my negative review. I did not want to come off rude or hateful, thats why I explained the reasons, I'll understand if you are angry at me, I do think your writing is really good, I just dont think this one was your masterpiece.

this is soo amazingBy the way I'm new to this fandom (lol) this is the end that I'm craved

This fic aged so well! I'm honestly in awe!