I just have to say this.
I. Hate. Nosy. People.
I don’t care how much she wants to help him, I hate people who think they should just stalk someone who is emotionally wounded, spy on them until they find out whatever info they wanted and then call that helping. I just can’t stand it!

I really want to make a painting or statue of Fox Naruto.

Hinata and Naruto acting like an old ninja couple unconsciously is adorable. 'How many kunai do you want?'

oh tsunade is speeding things up big time

joke*

hahaha I like that shop owner, that was a funny jike

The Hyuaga elders, Iruka, Kuranyi and Tsunami are such perverted creeps, ageists and control freaks in this fic. Every two sentences they would harass, peep on or patronize/oppress Naruto and Hinata. And Tsunade had basically atleast one moment every chapter where she she threatens shining for learning more jutsu and becoming stronger. Though the fiction obviously intends Tsunade to look reasonable it ironically shows just how much of authoritarian she is. I bet deep down she really dislikes people getting stronger because she rather has a weak village than a village she can not boss and bully around and exploit

That fight in chapter 19... Assessment spar? Six gates isn't a sparring technique. Nor is an Akimichi pill for that matter. It doesn't make any sense that life risking kinjutsu were brought out and nobody called an end.

Awesome chapter and plot and idea

Nope not reading anymore. Fight took too long. To the point it got bland because it was the same thing after the other. Seriously work your brain to do something different.

It would've been better if naruto unlocked the gates alongside his senjutsu and kyuubi cloak. But as usual people just say " oh you wanted this right? Right? " well no. We wanted the three combined but people keep writing the same bullshit as usual. The same damn cliches, the same damn cheesy lines. Do you ever learn not to copy other writers? I'm leaving fanfiction I'm tired of this bs.

This page has a mistake where It's written that Tsunade and Hinata went to their room. It should be Kurenai s nd Hinata. I enjoy your story. It does'n't have Sakura bashing and Naruto was aware of Hinata's feeling regarding his obliviousness. I read to enjoy whatever so thank you. Bye

ch 17

That was epic ! Thornado from giant primal efrit big as a mountain but much wider thornado of destruction or death . Wind biju unknown tails , Maybe 5 or maybe 6 .

ch 16

Even withouth anyAditional tails the 8 gate and the Kuubi previous mix with normaland freed 8 gate chackra making Kuubi the untinkable 9 force of nature . Nature disater , Wind or hurragane impersonating human biju without a tail . Unkown number worths of tails maybe 3 or 2 or 4 or 5 tails worth power .

ch 7

That pilfering could hinder naruto . Even a great fighter needs a medic .