Catherine is getting on my nerves in this. Why does she feel the need to police what he reads? She's so irritating and nosy. If he was enjoying it why does she feel like she has to make him do something more 'normal' cos she's a bitch?

Yeah, no, that's not how hospitals work. And why the hell would Catherine be the one to take him home? There's a lot of dramatic license taken in this story for the sake of convenience.

That nurse isn't very good at her job and it shouldn't be played for laughs - Catherine, you bitch.

I'm rereading this fic for what feels like the umpteenth time and it never gets old. This is such a creative crossover idea, one I never would have considered on my own. The characterizations are so spot on, and the way Ed interacts with the CSI team is so satisfying. Your pacing is sublime, and it's just so relaxing to read something so well written that I don't have to be on edge for something that'll make me go 'nope, I'm done.' An ultimate favourite that I wish I could goad my friends into reading.

Holy buckets. Beautiful. Long, but beautiful and totally worth it

That was a thrill from start to finish! I loved it! Ngl I completely forgot Envy was a thing until Sara was found in the church and then I just headdesked hahaha

Fabulous work! :D

Man this is good. I don't want to keep reading as it hasn't been updated in years but I can't stop! Why?! Why can't you keep writing this?!

This is super interesting so far! I've watched some clips for CSI but haven't seen much of the show, but you're doing great with Ed.

Amazing. I don't watch CSI, but this was a great adventure. Very in-character on the FMA side, and extremely well-written. 10/10 would recommend.

Love,
Lumina

I just stayed up all night reading this masterpiece! I should regret that decision considering my biomechanics lab is going to be late, but I have no regrets. You are fantastic! This story is fantastic! Your writing is clever and wonderful! And reading this was totally worth an day of doing math and writing reports in utter exhaustion! Thank you for writing this!

I can't stand Al in this. Oh, you didn't trust a huge secret with people who thought you were involved in murder at one point? Oh, you didn't automatically connect your pain to your using alchemy was drawing from your life force?
Honestly, everyone around Ed are annoying. They're nosy and condescending and so wish washy about their so called trust it's amazing.
(Catherine being a bitch for no reason and Lindsay being a whiny brat especially. )

Lindsey is in fact blond

I cried while reading this epilogue, as well... I don’t really know what to put here, just that this is so amazing. This last chapter really gave me a satisfying, bittersweet, & finished feeling, which is the best when you finish a story. I’m looking forward to checking out your other works!

where is footnote 3?

*cries from the sheer beauty of this fic*

Ah crud. This is the FmA anime crossover not the FmAB one right?