You know u can really tell when it is a girl talk and when it's a boy. See if u can find out witch one I am... Omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg! That was soooooo cute * falls into daze*

Cute :)

such a cute end!

i loved it

Short and sweet. Nice job.

this yaoi is awesome

so funny to read. when you go back over this, be sure to tell which boy is doding what when you put "his" "him", and "he". this will help yuour readers know which chaaracter you're talking about.

Wow,That was GREAT!

That was funny how Yuki

got all "excited" when he saw Hatori and

Kyou go at was also funny how Yuki

was drunk because that doesn't really seem

like something he would do.

MAKE MORE! XD I LOVE THIS AND SCREW ANYONE WHO THINKS OTHERWISE!