The scene with Hinata and Sasuke talking is nice and all... But the situation in which it happens is not really fitting for it.
They were essentially having a pre-lovers spat, in the middle of class, right after attention was drawn to them by the deceleration that they're now a junior ANBU team. (and who does that, anyway? ANBU are not supposed to be officially outed...)
At least describe how the conversion happened after everyone was done giving them polite claps or smt.

Please don’t write anymore your excuse of naruto being defeated was heighten hearing tchh i call bs because i know they can clearly blocked any sound of dosu attacked pathetic excuse if not for this mistake i will gladly read.

Often I enjoy well written stories, but this one has problems. I get that most writers tend to have love and relationships start younger in the narutoverse but the fact that you introduce it even younger than that is offputting. 11-12 y/o maybe 1-2 couples maybe, but when our have 5 couples ( only missing Shino and Choji for full sweep) hopelessly in love at or below that age it gets murky damn quick.

You then have the issue of to many off the wall changes, I am not talking about the butterfly effect, that at least is to be expected. No what I mean are the super major changes that are individually major turning points that each could be made into their own story. The original one was the swap between Gaara and Naruto, which alone would be interesting. You then added byakugan precognition, byakugan spirit sight, the oddity between Iruka and Tayuya, Zabuza and his sword, nii-bi resurrection and death connection, and those are just the start I would assume.

Hell a few of those could easily play off each other to make a great story if you wanted more than just 1 but not all of them at the same time.

I hope anko and Kakashi go with them, I suspect they will since they're probably going to prison for using kinjutsu. Plus Gaara is their kid and Naruto is special to them. Naruto should just take all the people to whirlpool and setup the village again. Might as well since they have so many going along. Plus the Uzumakis were seal masters so they probably have some good bases to build off of defense wise.

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Good. But conversations on marriage and children between 7 year olds were just weird. And that Hinata can do nothing besides kiss stuff. And Sasuke dreams of sex at barely 13

When I read the parts where Gaara was getting Kakashi and Anko together, I nearly died laughing. Honestly, who knew Gaara could be a match-maker!

Excellent story, I hope you bring out another chapter soon!

Very nice. The Change idea was sound and the grasp over characters is good this far.

finally! lets have a amped up Naruto vs. Gaara showdown.

I apolize for my rant in the last review I did, I just feel you could have had Naruto and company in the leaf by least seven chapters earlier.

I like this story, its unique and features almost all of the characters that bastard Kishimoto creates and then lets theres also some things I dont like about how you wrote/write it, to me it feels like a slice of life story. While I like those generally because too much action and fast developments destroy the feel of stories. Slice of life stories either end earlier than this or give enough action to smooth the flow of developments into something that keeps people interested. YOu have this whole build up of life of each character depths wise that your both dragging the story on, and wearing on potential readers patience with so little progress. Yes alots happened but eventually people stop caring about each characters lone developments and want to get into the character conflicts with each other. In other words...your dragging the damn story through the mud and the rainforest, get to the wanted action earlier than 22 chapters of bit developments.

This story is very good. However, it is becoming exceedingly complicated with plot twist after plot twist. You've spent more than ten chapters covering the Invasion of Konoha arc and it still seems that you've resolved nothing in the way of plot (other than the overall defeat of the Sound/Sand forces).

You've also really janked with the power level of Madara (and several other characters). In canon, in a one on one fight, Hashirama (the Shodaime Hokage) could crush Madara, Eternal Mangekyo or not. Making Madara so powerful seems to serve no purpose other than dragging out what would otherwise be an obscenely short fight between the two.

*Gets down on hands and knees and begs for more*

Just a quick note: according to canon, the Shodaime is stronger than Uchiha Madara. By a lot.
It took all of Hashirama's strength to fight Madara AND the Kyuubi at the same time to a draw.