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This is so GOOD. I absolutely love the platonic relationships shown and the characterization is right on. Great job!

Aweome! I love finding brotherly!Havoc fics. I feel like he gets ignored most of the time and it's refreshing to find something with him in it. Great job.

that is if you ignore the fact that Ed knows alchemy so he probably could have gotten out of the ice by himself. But hey! That's cool I guess.

The alternating PoV was so good for seeing the different people's reaction to the situation. And yeah, loved Havoc and Breda, so good!

This is I think the 5th time I'm reading this. I just truly adore this beautiful story.

I would love to know Roy's parental response when he finds out about the situation. They can't leave anything out, so they would have to reveal that it was Breda and Havoc's idea to cross the lake or whatever it was.

This is so good!

That was great

I'm not sure what I like better, this story or your conversations with Ed at the end. XD hahaha
Again A for in-character-ness. And I am a real sucker for man vs. nature stories, so... falling in ice and getting hypothermia? Ah yes good. *cackles*

Sorry, Ed. You're just so damn interesting that we just have to throw unfortunate events at you and see how you react! ;)

Once again, dear author, thank you much for sharing.

Very good. The fluff it's strong in this one. :)

Amazing!

Loved it! Amazing!

Awwww fluff!

I truly loved this so much! You did a wonderful job!

aaaaawwww

Brotherly fluff, so sweet. And yeah, I agree, he's the annoying kid brother that the rest didn't want at first but now they (and 'mom and dad') are the ONLY ones allowed to tease him. Heaven help if something happened to Ed because of someone else and the others were there, or weren't close enough. Heeheeheeee, I love h/c. 10/10