He would have been more luck with Tony as O'Neill's secret child.

Dude you gotta complete this story it's awesome and I would love to see how it goes forward from this.

This is really cool

Love your story sad to see you appeared to have dropped it.

Please finish the story! It's so cute!

It would be nice if this story was finished, that's all I got to say.

I like your plot and consept.

Really good story
Better if finished

Lovin' little Jack! He is too cute! :-)

I really love this story and wish that you would continu it

Hey, just found this wonderful story. Did you ever finish it? If so, please share the link, if not PLEASE DO! This is great and I'd love to read the ending. Please let me know. Thanks Angela

Allright, I'm not even halfway through this chapter and I just have to send a review. At the beginning of chapter 9 you say that is has been looked over for grammar by transgenic-girl. No offence to her, but she didn't do a very good job back then. It's still full of grammar and spelling mistakes and chapter ten is no better. It's seriously starting to annoy me. Now, English isn't my motherlanguage too so I understand. I bet I made a few mistakes in this review. I'm still doubting if 'of' should be with one 'f' or two. Anyway, I shall continue reading since it's still a good story and I wanna know the rest.

cute and interesting

REally great so far (especially w/beta)! Really wish you'd finish it. Please?

Hi, I know that it has been a long time, but have you considered finishing 'Lost Brother'? I would really be glad if you do. Great Job,so far. Tracy