I enjoyed the story until this chapter, when it suddenly turned into a crack fic.

"so then"

I love this story! Thank you for writing this.

I am so incredibly entertained I don’t know what to do with myself. I can hardly wait for chapter 10! It’s just solid work and I am really looking forward to the revelation of the witch king!

This started out well and then basically collapsed into something unintelligible. And now, left unfinished.

I think you got too caught up in minutiae and silliness as opposed to an actual plot.

Dumbwrasses. "The prophecy protected him." Stupid wizards. Though meh yeah that is wizard logic. Thanks for licking this up and continuing/rewriting it. It's really cool that the old author gave you permission. :)

A very interesting start to what promises to be a really good story. I have read quite a number of Crossover stories, and most have been good. It looks like it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.

Thanks for sharing!

The last line of the opening chapter is perfect Moody.

Please update!

Pretty funny semi cracking fic but every time u say occulmancy I want to die.

I find this a fun story. I wouldn't call the characters deep but sometimes a reader wants something lighthearted and this story delivers. Sad to see that it appears abandoned, but good while it lasted. Hope you are doing well Steve2.

I REALLY liked your howler idea. I laughed the whole time, out loud of course, and got some strange looks but it was worth it! Really great fic. Please update.

Dude UPDATE already!

A pretty good story shame you never finished it there is some bad grammar here and there and misspelling but overall it was with the read. And as for the story Harry "wrote" i can see why people would be angry for you just copying and pasting it into this story it had no relevence to the plot did not involve any of the characters from this world such as them offering there insight or criticisms and to top it off was a bit tedious trying to read it i gave up on it probably less than halfway through skimmed through some but it wasn't the story i came for and it is a lazy tactic to increase a chapters length when you dont have content to go there.

Oh god Harry sounds so emo. Ewwww.