aw that was so CUTE. Really cute. adorable. I LOVE this pairing. And Kaoru crying and HIkaru comforting him was just the sweetest thing ever. I'm like Kaoru, when I'm upset I'm just like "...get away from me I'm fine" though most people are like that. In fanfiction you love to see someone being comforted, but in real life you just want to be alone. Ironic huh?

That's wonderful, I learn a new word and I learn it in a beautiful fanfic

Aww so sweet! I agree with my esteemed fellow reviewers that you should continue in a sequel! This started off so well. I like the pumpkin metaphor and the clock striking midnight and all that.

One thing that I noticed, though (but I don't really see how you can do much about it, so you can ignore me..)is the word euphoric. In my opinion, its kind of strong or overexaggerated for the situation. But maybe that's just me? It is a cool word after all..meh.

Anyways, I loved this fic, so keep up the good work!

Yay! I like! I like that you used the carrage and pumpkin! Thank you!

aw! That was so cute! It made me sad to see kaoru so sad and vulnerable.

i love this so much. i also love the way you right i hope you write more

hey loved ur story ... really hope u continue to write more hitachiin romance_ hope there is a sequel to this _

Hi there! Great fic! Aw... the twins are so cute! yey! The twins deserves each other! AWESOME! Hope you'll make another one! _

Wow! I loved... the final was just great )

SO sweet! E! I love it so much! I can't stop squealing. You've put me in a good mood for my (sort of) date tonight D

Kya~! Kawaii fluffy goodness.

It was awfully cute, and I really like your writing style. It flows easily and has just enough description that it gives a complete picture without weighing the story down at all. And it really wasn't OOC either. Maybe slightly at some points, but sometimes that's needed or it wouldn't really be fanfiction, ne? Keep writing, you're good at it! n_nb

Ah that was super sweet..I really enjoyed reading it. I liked how you could have left this one as just either brotherly love or a sweet twincest moment-hm wonder where my mind is taking this lol. You're spelling wasn't that bad at all, but I also can't spell so maybe I missed any mistakes the only thing I would suggest is write more, other chapters explore this story more. Something this great shouldn't be a oneshot.

Wickedlady the twincest Queen!