Love you to.

I know how ya feel my dad died on groundhogs day a year and a half ago. I'm sorry for your loss. I really love this story and I am dying to find out what happens. Please do one more chapter on this story. A good story can be a story u til its finished and from what I've read of this one, which you obviously wrote on long ago, you are a spectacular writer and since it has been a while since you last wrote on this story is be willing to bet that you're a better writer now. Please don't leave this story here. All I'm asking is one more chapter, please. :) 3

Wow I really enjoy this story! I wasnt 100% sure at first but reading up to now I really like it, poor naruto! I hope everything works out for you I'm sure it will cos your writing is great:-) update soon please¡

Chapters are way too short. This doesn't hold that much promise if a good story. I'm done here. Hope you improved in the long run.

Not much better. Grammar hasn't improved. Still confusing to read. Plot is uninteresting.

Confusing to read. Use spaces between dialogue, fix your grammar. Let's see if the next chapter is any better.

Good job on this so far and... sorry about your dad.

how sad tears I hope your happy good luck smiles

I like it was good

I like it it's not bad

I like it was good and suspenseful

that is cute I like it

I like it actually

Suspense too good for words

I love this and i hope you do good in your future. And as selfish as this sounds, i still sort of want you to continue writing the stories, they're beautiful (perhaps too short for my liking :p) but this has to be one of the best I've read. You're doing great!