Reviews for Out of Place
Princesakarlita411 chapter 22 . 8/3/2017
Is there a sequel?
Ssmith724 chapter 1 . 8/9/2016
PLEASE finish this! I am obsessed with your work after reading several pieces..
TinkStar87 chapter 22 . 2/10/2016
Okay, i've just reread this whole story i don't know how many time, and i have just one question...WHERE'S THE SEQUEL? Please, please do the sequel i have to find out what happens next in this crazy timeline! Will the last four Senshi finally appear and help, or the other Kings/Generals? PLEASE do the sequel. Until then, Read ya Later ;)
Flareup4Ratchet chapter 22 . 1/14/2016
I just found this and read it in one sitting. I cried when Minako/Venus cried over Kunzite's death. I was hoping to find the sequel, but after all these years, I don't think that will happen. I was surprised to see that Kunzite came to Venus' aid even though he had been dead - unless Adonis took on his identity. I wanted to see what was going to happen next since you said that it will be continued in a sequel. Oh well. Great job on the story though. I loved how Mamoru/Tux Kamen comforted Mina while she was crying her eyes out, then the other girls joined in. When Mina is hurt and has a broken heart, she feels the pain immensely. Too bad she and Kunzite weren't like Usagi and Mamoru...Soulbound...
TropicalRemix chapter 22 . 10/12/2015
when are you going to write part 2 to this fic? What a horrible thing to happen to usagi. She can't have kids anymore.
NikkiBC chapter 22 . 8/27/2015
Please tell me there is more?!
slightlyxjaded chapter 22 . 4/4/2015
It ended there?! Holy crap! Hopefully you're still planning a sequel because holy cliffhanger!

Your writing is so different here than in SpellBound! Not in a bad way at all...if anything it was more clear, even though I'm a sucker for your poetic style in SB.

This was truly a great story and my heart aches so much for Usagi...especially when her family was murdered and she severed the link. All of your characters exhibited a lot of growth and depth to them...we really found out what made them tick. I really loved every moment and this story was quite dark in a way, but not overwhelmingly so. Combining three sets of villains ended up working in your favor as well. I'm just shocked it ended!

Thank you for writing this glorious story! If you get a chance to go back to it, fixing some grammar and spelling issues would help...as well as line breaks. However, that's all I've got as constructive criticism goes. Again, hopefully a sequel is still a possibility six years later.
Amazing work!
Saiaino23 chapter 22 . 3/24/2015
I need the sequel! I just spent the last two days reading can wait for more!
JemDragon84 chapter 22 . 6/18/2014
EGGS! Save the EGGS! She may not be able to have children the normal way... unless the Crystal can fix that, but As long as you save some of her eggs children are possible! You are a mean author leaving this cliff hanger... and for so LONG! WHAAAAAAAAAAA. Please tell me you have not abandon this series?! We need... I need to know what happens next!
GraphicsChyk chapter 22 . 4/7/2014
Will the continuation of this story ever be posted? Would love to see how you finish it.
YetAnotherJanewayFan chapter 6 . 11/24/2013
Oh I NSF can't contain this review any longer. I WANT TO WACK THEM BOTH! there I said it. I want to knock sense into the both of them! Erg! Now that that is out of the way, onto the next chapter!
sazbelle chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
Just read this for the second time. The writing style is incredible and I just love the power filled story line.
I'm also currently addicted to soulbound. I can't wait for the next update on that story. But my main question is: when are you going to do the sequel to this story? I'm wondering whether it is because to follow this on would be such a huge commitment and it might be difficult to see where this is heading, but I hope you can find some time to dedicate to it so that eventually it can be completed.
As ever I would highly recommend reading this if you are a Sailor Moon fan!
GalaxyStorm2013 chapter 22 . 3/20/2013
I just finished reading your story and it was fantastic! But I see you have not posted up the sequel and I really hope you have one to finish off this epic piece.
smfan4ever72 chapter 7 . 1/26/2013
Aw, their insecurities are getting in the way of a beautiful relationship...

I loved this chapter. Especially Kenji's approval of Mamoru. Very sweet!
mylove24 chapter 22 . 10/16/2012
Can't wait to read what happens next. Great story. I still hope they find a way to have kids because she already lost so much.
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