| Reviews for Ritzkin |
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Quaxo Mistoffelees chapter 6 . 2/29/2008 Hi there! I am slowly but surely going to read every story in this arc and review to each of them! I admit that I have actually already read up through The Protector, but am now going to catch up on the reviews! Awesome story idea! |
Equinox Kitten chapter 6 . 2/27/2008 Okay, so I read The Guardians on a whim, and just HAD to start reading the story arc from the beginning. T'is evil, evil I tell you, the way I was lured in to this. Seriously though, I enjoyed it thoroughly and will continue reading the story arc to see where it goes. |
Amanika chapter 6 . 6/14/2007 Wow, I loved this, read it on a reccomendation and am really glad I did. Is a different take on the Jellicles (and other tribes) to what I've seen before, but it works. I wasn't sure about the whole eating other cats thing at first, it sounded a bit far-fetched, but when you hear Munk's story it all made sense. Plus I love character back-stories, especially when they're kittens. You write Munkus/Ritzkin and Tugsy really well, if you've got any more in this series I'll deifinitely be reading them. |
JestaAriadne chapter 6 . 5/8/2007 E, end of part 1! I'm really glad I finally got around to reading this It was very 'unputdownable'! Or, um, it would have been, had it been an actual book. Munk and Tugger were so sweet and kitteny-bouncy but having to deal with all this serious stuff... And it seems like you've got it all very well set up, character/plot/situation-wise, for interesting things to happen in future so I shall clearly have to read the next parts son... Bravo~ |
JestaAriadne chapter 5 . 5/8/2007 Mep! Poor whatever-his-name-is! (...APHRODITE. *dies and is dead* Brilliant.) |
JestaAriadne chapter 2 . 5/8/2007 Oh. I like. I like big plot-ness too, so we shall see where this goes... XD Loved the first Munk-Tugger conversation. "You're doing a real good job guarding. I almost didn't get in.' XDD Aw. They're all happy. ...I suspect something is going to go rather wrong sometime soon... Basically, I'm loving the developing plot-ness and the setup, and the fact that, hey, Tugger is a main character -with- a character, so yay :) *reads on* |
Sleeping Tiger chapter 6 . 4/29/2007 Heh, cute _ Nice read after a long week! One thing that annoyed me a bit - you were doing the "Rit-Munkustrap" thing alot. ALOT. It could have been cut down quite a bit. Heh, aside from that, I feel rejuvenated with this story. Makes me want to get out my laptop and write! Oh, and another thing, you've been calling him a grey tabby all this time, and then in this chapter he's a silver! Was he just that grimey you couldn't see his true colors? Anyways, nitpickyness aside, good story, and I can't wait to see more from you! |
XxXcatXxX chapter 6 . 4/26/2007 Aw so cute. Very good chapter! |
Felinae Silvestris chapter 6 . 4/26/2007 Aww they let him in. Very cute chapter, and you're very welcome. Feedback is always nice. Great story overall, shame it's finished. Maybe a sequel about how Munkustrap becomes the Jellicle Protector? Just a thought. Loved it. |
Puddycat chapter 6 . 4/25/2007 I've really got to start coming on here more often . Great story, I love how sort of kitten-y and excitable they were, that was a really nice touch. _ |
Sarah Elizabeth Emily Woods chapter 6 . 4/25/2007 I really liked this story. Good job. Looking foward to see what else you write. |
XxXcatXxX chapter 5 . 4/24/2007 Yay very good chapter! sorry i didn't review the last one you are not unloved and neither is your fic lol! :D |
Sleeping Tiger chapter 5 . 4/23/2007 Aw. Very good. I have a huge smile on my face right now...to oppose the frown I had to see you thought you had no reviews for your fourth chapter -_- I gave you an albeit late review before this one came up! Anyways, I like this story! And the fact that Munkustrap is my favorite character does not color my judgment on this story whatsoever!...or maybe a little bit. You have one more chippie to go, and I can't wait! Good writing, you! |
Felinae Silvestris chapter 5 . 4/23/2007 Another great couple of chapters. I'm loving this story. Rumpus seems a little weird, nice touch! Nothing else to say really, can't critique anything really. Keep it up, I wanna know what happens next! |
Sleeping Tiger chapter 4 . 4/23/2007 Bah, despite the fact that I have this on my alerts, it fails to give me e-mails! This fact annoys me ever so much...anyways. That was a very serious chapter, that one. Nicely done, too. I just can't get over, though, Leviticus and Deuteronomy. The only think to get between them is Numbers. *sighs* okay! Corny joke out of the way! Anyways, I thought it was done well...kind of creepy how the other tribe works, and I was a little peeved at first how it was all "here's how the tribe works," but you tied it into the story with it having been explained to Tugger, and didn't just have it floating there as an explanatory chapter. Probably could have been elaborated on, but it works _. Keep writing! Don't stop now! I will cry is you do. *saves tears just for that purpose* |