Awww, cute :3
I wonder who they were going to spy with the hidden camera...maybe the teddybear was an answer to Dinosaurs's flowers ?

Nice one! I like teddy bears and this couple, so thanks to have done your best about them
And thanks for the reply on LJ, I will work on your stories soon.
*Hermi-kô***

Heehee! That was soo cute!

It was perfect! I noticed no spelling/grammar errors, and the plot bunny who attacked you is very appreciated by me!

Toodles!

BB96

The entire setup was great! I love the quirky shopkeeper and Hiruma getting all defensive. Talk about aw material!

Oww that was incredibly cute - even though I can't see Hiruma bying a huge teddy bear for Mamori, nor walking in the street with it in his arms. Must be funny, though !-

lol! Very, very cute. Exactly who were they planning on "giving" that teddy bear to?

Man, the shopkeeper should consider himself lucky that his shop was only burglarized...

That's pretty funny! Now, why were they getting a teddy in the first place?

Aww! Cute! Wonder why I never noticed this before...?

Aww. That was cute. I like your style of writing. Great job!

it was a really sweet story..

keep up a good work!

Actually, I didn't understand why they had to buy the teddy bear, but that last two paragraphs cracked me up. XD

This was really good!

~Jess

adorable! This was great, very dynamic, you write the characters well-and it's so cute.

cute lol i though that hiruma would go to bild a bear workshop and make a bear holding m16's and pistols lol hurry and update!

good one shot. ne is it?

keep up writing though!

I highly encourage you!