beam them back

I do hope that you update this oneday soon. It is a very unique and interesting xover. Please don't leave it hang.

Love to see an update. This is a unique cross that so needs more to it. Please update one day soon its a shame such a great fic is waiting to be finished.

Huh just realize it was a Heroes crossover. Don't know anything about that show.

This certainly sounds interesting. I love Vala. I was also laughing at the "one of the is clearly military" part, which is not only funny because it's so wrong, but because when Daniel first came to the SGC, he opposed pretty much the entire military philosophy. Except for when it came to Apophis, he made a bit of an exception for that. Over the years, though, he certainly changed a lot.

Anyway, please keep up the good work. Now excuse me while I pull up the wikipedia page for Heroes.

you have truly annoying tendency to start truly amazing and captivating stories and not finishing them. Updates?

I like the reference to the Paladins

Might be cool to see himj inh Jay Garrick's outfit.

The airman should have flashed his id and did the National Secutiy Bit.

"[...]but then again it was a Nokia, and in his experience Nokia mobile phones could hold power for enormous periods of time."

Are you getting paid for product placements? Unnecessary exposition.

I'm about half-way through at this point. Funniest line so far: "You look like Time Lord." :)

And horrors, it's been EIGHT months since this story - which is still officially on your active list - has been updated. I get the feeling you are spreading yourself too thin with too many writing projects.

I think your stories are both creative and compelling. My biggest criticisms are:

1) The usual suspects in word confusion, such as: Their-there-they're, pray-prey, your-you're, were-we're, say-stay, and one time using "kingship" instead of "kinship". Confusion of plural vs possessive vs contraction, such as: city's - cities.

2) All these incomplete stories! From a reader's point of view, it's frustrating to be reading a good story, only to find

(See what I mean?)

Great fic, very original and well written.

Superheroes are much more interesting than repetitive space battles.

Please continue, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Interesting. I'm not sure if you plan to continue, since it's been so long since the last update, but I do hope you do.

There are a few questions in this chapter which don't have question marks. Other than that, great story so far. I have all 23 chapters lined up but am presently wondering about Jansen's ability.

great story