| Reviews for Inconspicuous |
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About-Yearning chapter 1 . 9/3/2011 I like this. A lot. It seems really... well, realistic. She's a young girl with a crush, he's a man who's been denied affection for a really, really long time. But he's a ultimately a good guy, so he does the right thing, and remembers that she's just a young girl with a crush. It's perfect-sweet and fitting, without becoming creepy. |
BlackElectric chapter 1 . 7/29/2011 I read this story years ago and loved it but for some reason didn't review and I actually made a point of searching for it, to see if it was as good as I remembered. I just wanted to tell you I think it's amazing. Really well written. You've taken a pairing that could err on the sordid side and made it something really quite believable. The sexual tension you've managed to create is palpable. It's brilliant. Well done :) |
Kelsiee chapter 1 . 9/3/2010 You had a great original plot for Ginny /Sirius it was beautifully written and captured deep emotions, I loved it keep up the good work (: |
dog-tooth chapter 1 . 8/18/2010 This was really good :) I liked it. |
bleggh chapter 1 . 7/10/2010 very good&sad yet awesome..you did a wonderful job on these two! :) |
Faraaway chapter 1 . 8/19/2009 This story is so... bittersweet. I like it very much. Cheers. |
VoicezWithin chapter 1 . 8/25/2007 Wow. This was written very beautifully. Most people would assume, Ginny and Sirius to be a kind of corrupted, perverted story but this was just the opposite. It was sweet, and tender and sad. Good job. |
sidlovesnancy1979 chapter 1 . 8/3/2007 Very good short story. I loved it. It was sweet and tender and not at all pervy. Two thumbs up from me! |
quin chapter 1 . 7/18/2007 i would have liked more, i was actually hoping that the plot would continue to her fathers injury with the snake when she returns to headquarters and sirius. all the same, very nice, very cute. it was short and sweet... as i said before, i would have liked more. |
mrsbrandonflowers chapter 1 . 7/8/2007 i thought this was really good and i especially like the last line. i enjoyed the way it was written and i think you should definately write more! |
siriuslyblackxx chapter 1 . 5/29/2007 aww this was very sweet and well written! good job :) |
Starrynight12312 chapter 1 . 5/10/2007 this was really good. i enjoyed reading it. |
Ginny M. Weasley chapter 1 . 5/3/2007 Romantic. I want more. |
don'tfeellikeloggingin chapter 1 . 4/20/2007 aw that was so cute. just so well written and i loved that last line. in fact so much that i'm going to put it here so you know which one i ment. Harry Potter was not the only one left mourning the loss of Sirius Black. so sad. but very well written. |
FreeSpritSprite chapter 1 . 4/7/2007 it was good, i enjoyed it. thanks. |